Andrew Charles Forrest

The catapult clause

The catapult clause

 

One door closes

Another door locks

Nothing changes

Everything stops

From poor beginnings

Are poorer ends

Gather your winnings

Hope love transcends

Comments5

  • Suresh

    Tremendous depth in these few lines, on many levels.

  • Goldfinch60

    Love transcends all.

  • Michael Edwards

    Lets hope it does - I much enjoyed this shortie.

  • orchidee

    A fine write Andrew. Erm, I had a more negative version, starting..
    'When one door closes
    Another one slams in your face!'
    Doh! heehee.

  • Neville

    I'm sure it does mate.. if it dont there's going to be hell to pay.... a great little poetic gem...............



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