One Day Maybe

Neville

One Day Maybe

 

One day he

Sincerely hopes

You realise

 

He simply

Hurt you

To be kind

 

Twas a

Short year that

A long month tho

 

You wore a

Short dress

He wore long pants

 

You baked bread

He built boats

Somewhere by the sea

 

Elsewhere

A heart was broke

End of story

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 21st, 2019 03:16
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments6

  • Michael Edwards

    Something so appealing about this simple piece - I did enjoy the read .

    • Neville

      thank you squire... much appreciated too sir...

    • Fay Slimm.

      Poetic phrasing to sigh for in this gentle story of time spent as a duo and then ended with kindness - - your talent for tale-telling as always draws this reader for wanting more my friend....... Fay

      • Neville

        Thank you Fay..... and muchly appreciated....

      • orchidee

        I never knew my singing caused all this trouble and upset! heehee. I'm a pest though. Me singing goes on. lol.

        • Neville

          I have my speakers muted so I dont have to hear a thing.... unless I want to.. but thank you quietly regardless.....

        • dusk arising

          There's an untold story and a well intentioned deed revealed here.
          Together with the wonder - did she realise it was how it had to be resolved. The regret of hurting a loved one who may never see reason too.
          So well compacted into your lines.

          • Neville

            Thank you DA a much appreciated visit and true........ Neville

          • Suresh

            Better to hurt now, then to hurt forever.
            Well penned, my friend

            • Neville

              there is much truth in your words... thank you

            • Goldfinch60

              Those broken hearts can sometimes be mended.

              • Neville

                maybe GF60.... maybe just maybe they can...... in the meantime tho....... thank you my gold & glittering friend........................ N



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