One Day Maybe
One day he
Sincerely hopes
You realise
He simply
Hurt you
To be kind
Twas a
Short year that
A long month tho
You wore a
Short dress
He wore long pants
You baked bread
He built boats
Somewhere by the sea
Elsewhere
A heart was broke
End of story
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Author:
Neville (
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Comments6
Something so appealing about this simple piece - I did enjoy the read .
thank you squire... much appreciated too sir...
Poetic phrasing to sigh for in this gentle story of time spent as a duo and then ended with kindness - - your talent for tale-telling as always draws this reader for wanting more my friend....... Fay
Thank you Fay..... and muchly appreciated....
I never knew my singing caused all this trouble and upset! heehee. I'm a pest though. Me singing goes on. lol.
I have my speakers muted so I dont have to hear a thing.... unless I want to.. but thank you quietly regardless.....
There's an untold story and a well intentioned deed revealed here.
Together with the wonder - did she realise it was how it had to be resolved. The regret of hurting a loved one who may never see reason too.
So well compacted into your lines.
Thank you DA a much appreciated visit and true........ Neville
Better to hurt now, then to hurt forever.
Well penned, my friend
there is much truth in your words... thank you
Those broken hearts can sometimes be mended.
maybe GF60.... maybe just maybe they can...... in the meantime tho....... thank you my gold & glittering friend........................ N
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