Fear of love & criticism

Poetic Dan



I wish to share with others the things I have learned

 

Yet dealing with the judgement can leave you hurt

 

Even if all parties involved are trying their best

 

It is a constant battle with the human intellect

 

Letting go of our fear, of not being, shown or giving love

 

Yet we all are, in our own unique way, within everything we do

 

As this is all mine that I feel and yours is yours to own too

 

Each given this gift to interact with the universe

 

I hold no judgement against all life trying to understand it

 

All I ask is when you see mine you try to clear your mind

 

As we do this journey together and respect we don't know it all

 

Everything and nothing can always happen, it's down to us to listen

 

By protecting one thing, others will get hurt

 

Take a rose or any other flower, do other plants get to grow with it or do you choose what joins in around it. If you leave your garden to be a garden, with no control. It will become a jungle, nature will always take over.

 

I have pulled out the last of my unwanted growth, now I can breathe in my own optimistic view, walk in my own positive shoes.

 

Knowing love is all I give, show and do. What you see is all up to you.

 

This movie of life is one amazing ride, if you listen to the music of our sorrows and joy. The beauty and magic of nature will fill you with pride that money will never buy.

 

 

 

 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 26th, 2019 02:13
  • Comment from author about the poem: Another lesson from the negative yesterday to remember the story of the father, son and donkey. I will never please everyone, just make sure our heart & soul we follow.
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Comments2

  • Suresh

    It's all perception!!!!!!.....
    ..... you be the best you know how, and try to be the best you can be.

    Thnx for letting us share

    • Poetic Dan

      Thank you my friend, trying is all we can do.
      Really appreciated

    • Goldfinch60

      In this life we must try to do the best we can, if we keep trying we will go forward to the light that is always there for us.

      • Poetic Dan

        Absolutely, all in our own path and place in time. Thank you Good sir!



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