Christina8

The Fall

distant memories

easy to recall

fleeting thoughts

of taking the fall

 

long ago, yet

like yesterday

still brilliant

not black or gray

 

holding on tight

to feelings and memories

and to the electricity

coursing through me

 

I remember when

just your touch

was my drug

need it so much

 

Comments7

  • Michael Edwards

    It sure works - I've been away for a while and a super first read for my return.

    • Christina8

      Well thank you Michael! Appreciate the read!--Christina

    • orchidee

      A good write Christina.

      • Christina8

        Thank you so much Orchidee!

      • Goldfinch60

        Your new experimentations with words all seem to working Christina.

        • Christina8

          I appreciate that very much Andy! Thank you!--Christina

        • Neville

          the strictest of rules should apply only to Catholic priests & the like... maybe surgeons too oh' and psychotherapists..... never to poetry.... you have done good here.. very good... and because I now feel kinda good.. I shall lighten up on the surgeons... Nice one Christina.... N

          • Christina8

            LOL...sometimes I try to challenge myself and it works, sometimes it doesn't. My favorite is good old fashioned rhyming poetry. Glad you liked this....Christina

            • Neville

              you are more than welcome ..

            • PoeticBiscuit

              I think you did a fabulous job, it was a really enjoyable read. Sometimes it can be fun to try things a little bit different. Especially when they turn out so good.

              • Christina8

                Oh thank you so much, that made me smile! Appreciate the read---Christina

              • dusk arising

                More drama here, more punch.... in the delivery here for you today. I'm pleased you are adventurous and exploring ways to express your poetry. This works. I hope you're pleased with the reception. No rules, just do what comes to you on the occasion.

                • Christina8

                  I always love that you give honest feedback, none of that generic "Nice poem" stuff! Appreciate the read and the wonderful reply as always, dusk! No rules for my next poem :-)

                • Suresh

                  It's how you say it,
                  It's what you said so poetically

                  • Christina8

                    Thank you very much Suresh! Appreciate the read!--Christina



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