distant memories
easy to recall
fleeting thoughts
of taking the fall
long ago, yet
like yesterday
still brilliant
not black or gray
holding on tight
to feelings and memories
and to the electricity
coursing through me
I remember when
just your touch
was my drug
need it so much
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This is a totally new format for me. I tried using two or three words per line (obviously missed my own mark on several LOL). Anyway, I was just trying to think outside the box. :-)
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Comments7
It sure works - I've been away for a while and a super first read for my return.
Well thank you Michael! Appreciate the read!--Christina
A good write Christina.
Thank you so much Orchidee!
Your new experimentations with words all seem to working Christina.
I appreciate that very much Andy! Thank you!--Christina
the strictest of rules should apply only to Catholic priests & the like... maybe surgeons too oh' and psychotherapists..... never to poetry.... you have done good here.. very good... and because I now feel kinda good.. I shall lighten up on the surgeons... Nice one Christina.... N
LOL...sometimes I try to challenge myself and it works, sometimes it doesn't. My favorite is good old fashioned rhyming poetry. Glad you liked this....Christina
you are more than welcome ..
I think you did a fabulous job, it was a really enjoyable read. Sometimes it can be fun to try things a little bit different. Especially when they turn out so good.
Oh thank you so much, that made me smile! Appreciate the read---Christina
More drama here, more punch.... in the delivery here for you today. I'm pleased you are adventurous and exploring ways to express your poetry. This works. I hope you're pleased with the reception. No rules, just do what comes to you on the occasion.
I always love that you give honest feedback, none of that generic "Nice poem" stuff! Appreciate the read and the wonderful reply as always, dusk! No rules for my next poem 🙂
It's how you say it,
It's what you said so poetically
Thank you very much Suresh! Appreciate the read!--Christina
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