Thirst.
Oceans of sheer care-starvation promote
hunger's race
toward the non-negotiable state
of turbulent action
so doused in wait thirst builds on hope.
The force in that very first trickle of love
moves pebbles
of potent emotion, churns up
beds of raw possibility
that produce a deluge of readiest proof.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: July 30th, 2019 03:17
- Comment from author about the poem: Looked at the picture and verse and the words came to mind. Hope you enjoy.
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Comments8
A fine write Fay.
Pleased you stopped by and read my small verse orchi - thanking you kindly.
there can be no mistaking where the inspiration for today's poetic gift were conceived ...
I think it came from the heart and your's and true.....
Lovely to know you enjoyed the verse and to know also that you think whence it came - thank you for this kindest of comments ................... Fay
my pleasure and you of course are most welcome..
Your magical pen has again created a joy of a read.
Ah - you honour my pen dear Michael and thank you for your encouraging comment
In one word - enraptured
Oh Wow - - am so glad the essence of my stanzas hit the right spot - and really appreciate that sole word my friend.
Hello Young Fay Some super verse my friend I really love reading your poems Thank you
Well Hello from me too - am delighted you like what you see in my verses and bless you for your encouragement.
There's an ocean of love out there... I'm hoping for a tsunami any day now... even got my cozzie on.
Ha - - - well I hope you don't get carried away when that tsumanmi of love makes holes in your cozzie. Thanks a load for your visit and read.
Thanks for sharing FAY ! When one anthropomorphises the Ocean in to LOVER it produces a very powerful picture of relentless LOVE which Angela & I loved ! Love both the printed Poem and the awesome riposte it sparked in You ~ Powerful writing !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙
That hope is within us may it soon be beyond hope and become proof in our glorious lives.
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