her weakness

dusk arising

 

it was odd shopping at sainsbuys
without her
she would suddenly disappear
and a game of
peek a boo - hide 'n seek
would ensue


hovering by the ice cream freezer
spellbound
he looked at her weakness
finally realising
there would be no sale today

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 31st, 2019 04:33
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  • Goldfinch60

    You’ll find me by the cheese counter!

  • dusk arising

    Its odd the things which stop us dead and jolt our thoughts to where they must travel for our own sanity.

  • Neville

    This is one of them great little sad reads I like so much .. clever, well crafted and easily relateable to too sir.... N

    • dusk arising

      Came to mind reading someone else's piece this morning. Just jolted it out. It must be true for so many ppl in many variations of my Sainsburys here. Thanks Neville, appreciate your kind words.

      • Neville

        you are more than welcome DA...

      • Michael Edwards

        Conjures up such a great, albeit sad, scene.

        • dusk arising

          But its a good excuse for buying an ice cream which i prefer anyway.

          • Michael Edwards

            Do you recall those awful blocks of ice cream between cardboard wafers?

            • dusk arising

              Michael.... that was 1937... i'm only 67. lol no i don't.... i remember small rectangular lyons made ice cream in greaseproof or similar paper which the shopkeepers would drop into a rectangular rather than circular cornet...

            • Suresh

              I always looked like a lost puppy....

            • Christina8

              Too many choices....I just walk on by! Very cute poem....and oh so true!



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