Unwrapped.
Happiness
was a surprise ode, signed
Only for You.
A red rose on the pillow
of a four-poster and
sheets nectared in passion.
Happiness
was the taste of love's juice
on virgin lips.
A first drink of champagne
between kisses and
coffee the morning after.
Happiness
was racing rain, skinny dips
and beach frolics.
A warm duo-bath at sunset,
decadent chocs and
the fun of silly laughter.
Happiness
now unwrapped oozes scent
of treasured thrills.
A captured event caught on
videoed film and
dredged in covert rapture.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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Comments7
A fine write again Fay.
My humble thanks again to you dear Orchi.
Hey Fay.. this is one hell of a love poem for sure... darn near perfect, and then some....
Neville
Sure glad you think that mon ami- -- love poems come easy to my rife fancy - just saw the picture and imagined the rest - - many big thank yous for your lovely comment.
always a pleasure...
An uplifting write Fay - now where is that skinny dipping taking place?
Now that would be telling methinks !! ............... good to have your visit and comment my friend.
I am drenched by your words.
Glad the meaning washed over you and pleased you enjoyed it Suresh.
Love the PHOTO FAY ~ and yes it does stir ones MUSE ! Angela & I love all your LOVE POEMS because they come direct from your Loving Heart and Loving Experience !
Verse 1. Made us smile ~ we have booked a Four-poster for our Honeymoon ! V 2. Echoes of passion to come ! V 3. Does one Skinny Dip on ones Honeymoon ? Spanish Honeymoon Suits have King Size baths with the taps in the middle ~ skinny soaping ! V 4. Covert Rapture indeed but for *Our Eyes Only* ~ sorry to disapoint but nothing on YOUR-TUBE !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
I am delighted you and your darling get pleasure from my little writes and many thanks for your list of similarities waiting for when you two are spliced ..........I can certainly recommend a four poster my friends............... x Fay
How love makes the world spin for lovers..... life at the excitement end and lasting memories...... With such memories one knows they really took part in what is probably lifes most exciting and rewarding of experiences.
An excellent summary of love's greatest gifts D.A. - the mind stores away what fun love can be and draws many a time on its unforgettable experiences............. thanks a load for this lovely comment.
Happiness
was opening the poem
and seeing words,
Composed with love and joy
Where Fay led her pen.
Ah - what a lovely poetic comment after reading the verse and thank you so much dear Andy....
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