Love you more

Poetic Dan



How much more I love you!

More than the Ants you'll ever see
More than the Bananas to its tree
More than the Caterpillar on a leaf
More than the Dog loves to pee
More than the Eggs to a cake
More than the Fly to all the mess
More than the Giraffe missing a neck
More than the Hippo in the mud
More than the Imagination can keep up
More than the Jelly wants to wobble
More than the King upon he's throne
More than the Lion in the jungle
More than the Monkey wants to swing
More than the Night shining the stars
More than the Open waiting arms
More than the Pickle in the jar
More than the Quietness in alone
More than the River that wants to flow
More than the Spider to the web
More than the Turtle in its shell
More than the Uniqueness that's in you
More than V, W, X, Y and Z
More than every word from the alphabet!

Happy birthday my princess rainbow ninja!

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 1st, 2019 03:04
  • Comment from author about the poem: Today is my amazing little ninjas 13th birthday, she is forever my light day and night. We may not be together but we're never apart as music connect us, deep in our hearts.
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Comments8

  • orchidee

    Ahh, a fine Ninja Happy Birthday tribute Dan! Arrgghhh - teenage years?! But you love 'em still!

    • Poetic Dan

      Thank very much but she could never be as much trouble as I was 😉

      Always appreciated my dear

    • Michael Edwards

      A tugfull of great comments - I could use them all when it comes to my own daughter, to my wife, in fact to all the female relatives in my life. I love them all.

      • Poetic Dan

        Absolutely, they bring out our best. Always appreciate the reflection my friend

      • Fay Slimm.

        Such a loving birthday poem Dan and adding my own wishes to your beautiful daughter on her special day.

        • Poetic Dan

          May it continue, always appreciated
          Thank you

        • Suresh

          ...more than words can express.

          • Poetic Dan

            Yet we will forever try..

          • Neville

            Happy Birthday Rainbow Ninja.. can ya see that ya Dad loves ya...

            Coz we can.......... N

            • Poetic Dan

              Perfect echo my friend, if there is ever any doubt or I leave this place. I leave my heart and soul in every word I use!

              Always appreciated

              • Neville

                no worries....

              • dusk arising

                Dan, if you put that video together you sure have a talent for it...... talk to me and i will give u ideas about how to get work from it....

                What a lovely poem... laughed out loud several times.... great kids you have... great dad they have... thought again about your words -they have the only key and they showed yo your key,
                Happiness just shouts its presence from both vid and poem.... you create good vibes.

                • Poetic Dan

                  That sounds interesting, it was done in 2016 I just used an app to put all the photos and some videos I had.

                  I'll continue to be as honest as I am and when I watch it back I cried. Still not sure why, at first it was because I don't have a lot of stuff to do that again. Then my lady showed me all of the stuff that she has and I realise now, it's because I've been living it more I have no time to take them.

                  I always appreciate any help of advice my friend.

                  We all enjoy some good vibrations! Cue tune 😉

                • Christina8

                  Oh your daughter is so lucky to be loved so much! Happy birthday to her! Good vibes to you both!

                  • Poetic Dan

                    As am I receiving it all back, thank you so much.
                    Always appreciated

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Happy Birthday to Rainbow Ninja. Your love for her shines through your words Dan, that love will shine forever through your Spirit, your soul and you words. Great write.

                    • Poetic Dan

                      Is only getting stronger my friend!
                      Always appreciated



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