Christina8

Facade

Today I wear a facade

so you can't see my pain,

and you won't know my loneliness

but my tears will still fall like rain

Comments8

  • Goldfinch60

    Most of us wear masks in differing situations, may your facade soon become reality as your life shines with love.

    • Christina8

      Lets hope it was just one bad day.....thanks andy!

    • Michael Edwards

      Pain can't always be hidden - great shortie Christina.

      • Christina8

        Thank you Michael....appreciate you stopping by!

      • orchidee

        Is it a fa├žade, without that hook thing missing under the 'c'? I dunno how to insert it. I must know these things! heehee.
        They won't see yours tears then if it's a rainy day.
        We may all it at times. I mean, we don't know everyone, to give them a blow-by-blow account of troublesome times.

        • Christina8

          Yes, sir! I didn't know how to put that thing under the c! lol. See you made me laugh!!

        • orchidee

          Oh it's put that hook thing in itself, under the 'c'. Haven't I got anything better to worry about?! It's 'sad', I know! lol

          • Christina8

            You're too funny, thanks for stopping by!

          • Fay Slimm.

            Think that tomorrow will sure to be better dear Christina - - after a while facades can fade so hunker in there - - - for just today.

            • Christina8

              Thanks so much for your input and for stopping by!-----Christina

            • orchidee

              I didn't put that hook thing myself in my comment - honest! Me laptop must speak French then. lol. A cedilla it is, to make 'c' sound like 's'. Why not use 's' in the first place? doh! We must know these things. lol.

              • Christina8

                Well, anyway, thanks for making my day, Steve. You're funny!

              • Neville

                I think we all wear masks .. this is a little gem...

                • Christina8

                  Thank you Neville....much appreciated! Thanks for the read!---Christina

                  • Neville

                    my very sincere pleasure... N

                  • PoeticBiscuit

                    Who knew you could put so much emotion into only four lines? Another great write, keep it going.

                    • Christina8

                      Thanks so much for the compliment, I really appreciate it!!--Christina



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