I'm back on road and looking twice, seeing the past looking nice
With that spring I'm my step, there's no need for doors.
I'm walking on water, getting drunk on the cause
Dancing with nature, attempting little vocal cords
Until that day I arrive, when none are used at all
I'm staying focused on the moment, controlling the flow
I love my bike, I love my life
I love the mother of our soon to see light called... Mmm(kept in head)
I adore my first two children and the moments with there mum
If not for her love I wouldn't of ever made it past 21
I admire my new elder son, giving me a whole new meaning to question
Connecting from his 13th to nearly 16th, learning in the respect earned within each moment passing
Being vulnerable has no limits, you can still find great strengths from with in it
I am mesmerised by all the energy, of the poetic souls I've met in 5 years
I am constantly inspired to be more of what ever I dream
I let this energy freely pass through me, being all that I am
The best version of me on a stage with everyone I can
Becoming the ripples and waves, in harmony with all the universes rays
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Just giving you me! O and this is my first week back out on my bike from my nose operation. I may of lost past of my skin but it has set free more of the passion inside me, my life is amazing!
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Good to hear, grand to read and great to see...... peddle hard and see if you can get more than the 3 G's I just gave ya....... Neville
Haha your my! G
Always appreciated
The way you have about you of humbly sharing makes you immediately likeable. Maybe you are a right pain when you are drunk (I am -so i'm told) but that doesn't show here.
Accepting one's own vulnerability is accepting one's own fallibility which is something we all should hope to retain lest we become a right bloody know all.
Love becomes a much bigger word as our lives lengthen.
No drunkenness here my friend I always stop after two.
Always glad you could join me!
What a lighthearted way of looking at life - - a gem of write Dan and thanks for the share of your dance with nature. I love that inspiring quote too.
A honor to know your heart is lighter!
Makes every print word worth it 😉
Uplifting - the world is yours Dan.
Always appreciated my friend
I love the light-hearted approach you have taken, very uplifting. Beautiful poem, thanks!
Glad to see you up high with me, always appreciated to know who we reach.
Much peace and respect endless
You're insanely welcome! 🙂
You just took who you are as a person and put it into a poem. and just like you it was amazing.
Now that is a smile returned
Always appreciated my friend
That reflection you see is the awesome in you!
Keep it up 😉
May that energy and the ripples of your waves keep on towards the light of your new life stay with you into places of more joy and love.
Each day it does must be the help of the blessing of your words. Keeping my mind on what I deserve!
Always appreciated my friend
Now you can become the teacher....
Of nothing...
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