That Secret Place
Oh’ my secret love
As I kneel at your feet
My love
Pray take me to that secret place
Where I might be complete
Oh’ my secret love
Let me taste your secret taste
Let me feel your secret heat
Take me to that secret place
Where I might be complete
Oh’ my secret love
Your secrets safe with me
My love
I shall be discreet
Pray take me to that secret place
Where I might be complete
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Author:
Neville (
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A good write N. I can't find ya. Oh, you're in a secret place, that's why!
Or as I say; 'Take me to a secret place, my love' / 'Anywhere away from Orchi's singing'. heehee.
you are so in tune with popular opinion..... Bless ya orchidee... keep looking....... N
Yep, that's the popular opinion on my singing! Cooeeee, you still in that secret place? I'm looking for ya!
I shall need one of me over-40 pills at this rate! You got a spare Phyllosan?
try two of them purple ones....
Well mine is a forest with a river and a waterfall but it is hidden under a rainbow so you probably would never find it ...
I take it that's a thumbs up then...
Never let it be said I give up easily, I shall now look for ever and until I find thee.............
Oh it’s not worth the endeavour! I rather like my solitude!
My secret place is where My River meets My Spirit. Good write Neville.
cheers my friend......... sounds like an ideal spot for fishing and contemplation...... N
A medley of clever double-entendres cascade effortlessly down these interpretive lines
- -Your aptness for setting alight imagination is second to none mon ami - - a real gasp of a read...........
Think I may just cut and paste your lovely response .. bless you and true..... Neville
....you will only be complete, when your efforts make your lover sigh in estacy...
Oh ya mean several times Monday to Friday and double that at Weekends and Bank Holidays... You do of course realise I'm only jesting.... tis much more frequent in real time .... Cheers mate... N
So well written, Neville. Love the repeating last 2 lines! I think your writing continues to get better....is that possible??...Christina
Thank you Christina.. I do hope so....
Well I'm pretty sure! A pleasure reviewing your poem!
I'm with Christina (not literally) - your writing goes from strength to strength.
Now I'm blushing for real cheers Michael.... N
I’m glad I decided to take a look into your writing because now I don’t think I can ever stop! Your skill only seems to grow.
You are far too generous for words my friend, but these next five are truly meant....... Thank you so very much...
Neville
Neville at his poetic sensual best again.
Gosh how many more discrete encounters will fall from those creative fingers to net our curiosity and imagination.
Great stuff... i do feel titillated!
You please me greatly with those encouraging words my friend an no kiddin..... N
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