Unreal.
Shadowy movements of ethereal
music play nebulous games
with the moonlight's white fingers
atop an unreal lake-scape .
Tonight diaphanous curl of filmy
grey smoke whispers its
journey along water's dark face in
slow-paced limpidity.
Time stands still while stars dance
like tiffany dew
on a blackening trout's fishy back
with myriad translucence.
Dappling water mistily pictures
the sickle's glowing shape
of half-seen gauzy luna lantern
trying to flicker again.
Clouds melt and I gaze entranced
as the yellowy ghost
of a flimsy late butterfly passes
in silence so closely.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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Such other worldly beauty you have crafted here 💜
Good to know the read gave you something of beauty dear Sylvia - - thank you so much for the lovely comment.
A lovely write Fay.
I recall a poem I did about a trout, an old trout. I mean KP. I wish I never had married her! (That's cruel Orchi. heehee).
A happy that you enjoyed the write Orchi and thank you for your visit and comment.
You have just gone and done it again Fay... another absolute work of poetic art......
Respect & hats off to you......
Neville
Wow - hats off eh Nev ? -- -I feel two heads taller and a blush coming on after reading your lush comment on my view of lakeside twilight. Merci very beaucoup
Because ya worth it.... N
Oh the scene you paint - I could be there.
Yes and were you able to be there I am sure you would paint it most aptly dear Michael - thanks a big brushload for your visit and comment.
moody Fay.. moody
that big ole moon's reflection plays a hide n seek game with the clouds upon the living lake. I want to see the flash of colour, ... yes there it is!... before i set off home to the root of that whispy smokes source and my loved ones.
every poet tells a story. yours draw me in.
Oh I hoped you would get the moody feel to this lakeside twilight unrealness D.A. and get drawn in - - glad you were there at the scene and enjoyed it - - - your comments are so supportive and thank you...........
Beautiful.
Yes quiet water at twilight can start the imagination dear Andy and I know those walks do the same for you . Thank you a score for your visit and read.
Your writing almost put me in a trance as I read...so beautiful, Fay! Absolutely lovely!!
You are kind and so encouraging and a great big thank you dear Christina -
So much wonderful imagery, here. I must read more of your pieces. This was a pleasure!
Well thank you for your visit and comment - and welcome to MPS - -I look forward to reading your work too.
Oh my...I had better refine it first! Lol.
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