Fulfilled.
Love is
like a fine thread
of disturbing presence,
so sings Youth with resentful air
while Age looks on with experienced care
knowing Love never regrets what
dreams turn into, or not,
for self-fulfilled
Love is.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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Comments9
Yes Love is everything wonderful.
Very true Andy - - wonderful love can heal just about the worst heartbreak - - really grateful for your in-put my friend.
A diamond of a verse Fau
Well presented
Anh - - thank you Andrew - - am pleased you spotted the diamond shape.
Good write Fay.
Thanking you muchly Orchi.
The voice of experience whispers soft throughout these words and oh' so very meaningfully ....
a poem penned to near perfection ..
You are a diamond too...... Neville
A diamond eh ? - Well I shall walk around feeling very rich for the remains of this day Nev. - thank you gallons my kind friend for your perceptive read and expressive response
Aaah yes, love's learning curve we know as life.
Thoughful mature writing reveals this love shining out to us, as it does in your well crafted works daily.
Yes love can shine out from words on a page and readers can feel it as you kindly say...You are so supportive and genuine thanks D.A.
Love is just that -
And what could be better than your reminder that love is really - - just that......... thanking you kindly for your visit and read dear poet-friend.
Super form and write.
So glad you enjoyed the red Michael.
A wonderful poem and I loved how you presented it!
Thank you Christina - - for your visit and your lovely comment .
My Dear Fay,
In your inimitable style you’ve expertly penned the words that express what ‘Age looks on with experience care’!
The older I get, the more appreciative I am of that thing called LOVE...a love that can heal all wounds..at least my wounds!
~Laura~
Dear Laura,
You are so right about the value of love becoming more clear as the years go by - - so pleased you enjoyed the read and its meaning. - - and another big thank you for adding this piece to your favourites........... warm wishes from Fay ...........x
My pleasure dear friend!🤗
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