Honey, you make me feel alive
like all my dreams came true
as if I'm completely electrified
my body screams for you!
When I get to thinking
what we are capable of
I get all hot and sweaty
and search for my love
Oh, how my nerves tingle
and order me to get undressed
Now with you and I alone
We kiss and I'm impressed
Honey, now I know I'm alive!
I'm aware I rush to satisfy
I would slow down but
dear I think I might die!
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 9th, 2019 23:48
- Comment from author about the poem: I don't think it's necessary to tick the 18+ box but i did it just in case.......
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Comments8
May that feeling of being alive remain with you Christina.
Thank you so much Andy, it's appreciated!!....Christina
a moment beautifully captured
BRAVO
Thank you so much for your very kind reply! Much appreciated!!...Christina
Magic moments - ah to return to my youth with the knowledge and patience of age. Fine write C
Thank you so much Michael for your lovely comment! Much appreciated.....Christina
Filled deep appreciation of what loved can do..... wonderful read Christina.
Thanks so much Fay, Very much appreciated!!--Christina
Fido, my 18+ watchdog, says it was necessary to tick the box. But he's rather strict, and a fussy old dog! lol.
Glad someone's enjoying themselves. heehee.
I was still alive, when I tried not breathing for 24 hours. I did not feel very well afterwards though. lol.
Well I'm glad I ticked the box then! Oh you are too funny, thanks orchi!!....Christina
I can't understand why I felt unwell. I was only trying to save air for 24 hours. Hmmm. lol.
Beautiful poem of love and passion.
Thanks so much for your kind reply DA, I appreciate it!--Christina
I imagine the fella you penned this for is one hellova lucky fella..
Neville
🙂 Thanks for the smile and thanks for very kind review, N!......Christina
my pleasure..... N
Stay alive, and replay it often
Sounds good to me, thanks for your lively comment Suresh, it is appreciated!! Christina
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