Tune: Crucifer
('Lift high the cross')
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Chorus
Lord, look on us, and our afflictions see
Helped by your sustaining grace we shall be
Lord, look on me, things body, spirit, soul
Whate'er my needs, come heal and make me whole - Chorus
Lord, look on nations, help us know your way
Lead us unto the light of lasting day - Chorus
Forgive where we sin, by Christ's cleansing blood
We set free, redeemed, by that full sparkling flood - Chorus
Help us take up cross daily, self deny
As you went before us, still your presence nigh - Chorus
Seeking to use each hour, and waste none
In learning, growing, [in] image of Christ your Son - Chorus
He who did live, die, and then rose again
Gospel news, salvation, now to all men (mankind) - Chorus
- Author: orchidee ( Offline)
- Published: August 10th, 2019 02:00
- Comment from author about the poem: A hymn-poem with verses in 10.10. and chorus in 10.10. The original has 12 verses - phew! Though they are all 2 lines each, there is the chorus at the start, and after each verse.
- Category: Spiritual
- Views: 23
Comments7
Your pen never fails - keep it filled.
Thanks M. Well, me propelling pencil thing blew up after one poem. The spring bust in it or something. Always dodgy if ya spring busts, yes?!
When my spring busts I wet myself - can you get a new one on the NHS?
I could get you one from Joe Bloggs, but he's a bit shifty!
There could never be any way better than your chosen title today - "Looking to Love" - thank you Orchi.
Thanks Fay. I see it now as Christ looking on us, to love us; and our looking to Christ, to love and serve Him. 🙂
Did you have to cut the other 2 verses due to no lead in the pencil
No I didn't mean it to sound like that
DOH!
I'll get my coat
Thanks Andrew. Well, I cut out about 6 verses I reckon (the original has 12 verses). Plus the Chorus every time. That's about 24 verses in all - phew!
Where ya going? Getting ya coat? lol.
Hello Orchidee,
A beautiful write.
Psalm 136 God's enduring love is one my favourite stories about Love in the Bible.
Keep writing
FineB
Thanks Fine.
Great title and a beautiful write today, Steve!!--Christina
Thanks Christina.
I really liked this... N
Thanks N. Bingo - all the 10's!
Good one Orchi.
Thanks Gold.
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