You are so rare
You are so fine
Every word you give
Brings more to mine
Never stop giving
What can't be stop
A word printed
A published thought
Endless space
Infant ways
Life is yours
Live it today
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Thinking of all the amazing souls I have in my life never forget how amazing you all are!
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More wisdom from the sage within you Dan.
Reflected from you all my friend, the wisdom grew when I realised I have a clue. Writing your own truth as others do!
Always appreciate your time
Making yourself begin to write, those early clumsy efforts we all began with soon leads to self knowledge doesn't it. Somewhere inside you you knew you had to express the poison that was in your mind and in writing you gave it away..... clearly it is gone from you now...... what remains of it has become the solid bedrock of your build for the better future in your eyes.
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I am smiling big, because you just made me smile big.... N
Because you are so fine and I really enjoy your rhyme!
Have a great day Mr N the honour is all mine
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Great message Dan
Thank you for seeing my friend
May friendships grow
with the words you distribute
a mighty fine tribute
to all who you know
Yes! It is an honour to know you all, thanks for joining my show 😉
Dan,
YOU...are the rare one
YOU...are the fine one
YOU...yes...YOU
ARE THE AMAZING ONE!
An awesome write indeed!!
~Laura~
Yep.... You just inspired more thoughts, I'm off to write
Awesomeness at HIS (Dan) best!
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A fine write Dan. My singing is rare, and that's a fact! It's a rare occasion if someone lasts out listening to me singing a whole song through! heehee.
Say no more...
Maybe that I still love every word!
An awesome write today Dan.......thanks for sharing!!
Thank you my friend for your continuous vibration tattooed on my skin!
Forever remember in the ink of the inspiration life continues to give with all the people I have in it.
I had forgotton about that tattoo----thanks for the smile when it was needed! Very grateful.
Ah, I see the infancy of the innocence say a child holds close to his/her heart and the thought of working out who is who. You captured that in your beautiful poem thanking all of those wh adhere to what you write. Keep you innocent part and delve deep into what you can't normally perceive on a daily basis. There inbetween the number 1 and 2 is another dimensional stunning world most of us almost miss. The imaginations you bring to the board shall remain there forever in our hearts, Dan. Thank you for being so wonderfully adapt to making us feel your love. That's important to remember, It's all about living, it's all about loving and it's all about giving. There is nothing other than reaching the top of your world which it looks like your're heading upwards with the force of your determination to hit that perfect poem....!!!
3rd time lucky if this actually loads, I could never thank you enough for your words. They make me feel more alive and free to be, I'm now going to write down (ish) what didn't send and I'm going to call it king among Kings.
Always appreciated my friend
Brothers in arms, Dan. love to love.
Always so kind Dan! That type of personality is rare.
All it needs is a word or a thought from somebody and you can go along the path to the wonder of life that you have now found Dan, may that always be the way.
Mover forget those that stood by
Well penned.
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