Bated Breath

Christina8

She melted like a scoop of ice cream

soft in his capable strong arms

thoughts danced in her head like a dream

after he grazed his hand across her bosom

 

Faster and faster went her bated breath

as her heart almost leapt out of her chest

he came and granted her a little death

simply by giving her loves stolen kiss

  • Author: Christina (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 12th, 2019 00:14
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  • Michael Edwards

    So steamy - A great read even at this early hour.

    • Christina8

      Thank you Michael---Appreciated!! Christina

    • Goldfinch60

      Wonderful erotic words Christina.

      • Christina8

        Thanks Andy..Appreciated! Christina

      • dusk arising

        Love and lust aroused and those magical first moments of mutual concession.

        Beautifully and gently told here with a feminine fragility i felt.

        • Christina8

          Thanks so much DA! Appreciated...Christina

        • orchidee

          Glad some ones are having fun! heehee.

          • Christina8

            LOL.....Thanks so much Steve!...Christina

          • Fay Slimm.

            Wow - - a gasp of a read dear Christina - - must dash to have a cold shower after this.............. a beautiful portrayal of love's stolen kisses.

            • Christina8

              Thank you for the kind reply Fay! Appreciated! Christina

            • Suresh

              It's the sly mind, that plays the erotic games - and the body is left to heave and sweat as a result.
              Nicely done, I hope it takes you there again and again

              • Christina8

                Thank you for your wonderful reply, suresh. Much appreciated! Christina

              • PoeticBiscuit

                This one is a little steamy haha. It was well written though!

                • Christina8

                  Thank you PB! Your reply is appreciated!---Christina

                • Suresh

                  It's the sly mind, that plays the erotic games - and the body is left to heave and sweat as a result.
                  Nicely done, I hope it takes you there again and again

                  • Christina8

                    Thanks again Suresh!

                  • ANGELA & BRIAN

                    HOLA CHRIS : ANGELA HERE : BRIAN & I have missed your poems this last week and we will begin to post again tomorrow ! Love all your LOVE POEMS and we can really relate to every one. When we are together our (stolen) kisses also generate that much heat : very beautiful !

                    Blessings & Love to You & Yours
                    Muchos Abrazos y Besos tambien
                    ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

                    • Christina8

                      I was beginning to wonder where you both were! Thanks for the kind review, but my muse is waning. I will write again when I can but I will review yours.
                      Muchos abrazos y besos tambien. Tu amiga Christina

                    • Neville

                      what a darn good little racey number you pinned here Christina ...

                      got me panting too.................. Neville

                      • Christina8

                        Thank you kind sir! Very much appreciated......Christina

                        • Neville

                          my pleasure ma'am..



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