I can see through
a different aperture
It's knowing we have
a love that's mature
A love that stands
the test of time
And knowing its true
makes it so sublime
We've had our tests
oh yes, it's true
but my heart
beats just for you
And through that
aperture I see
grandchildren someday
for you and me....
The future is endless
don't you know?
For our love to
blossom and grow
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 14th, 2019 00:08
- Comment from author about the poem: A simple poem for my husband but he liked it! :-)
- Category: Love
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Comments9
The beauty is in the simplicity. Your words are dripping with emotion. Great job Christina!
Thanks so much PB!! I appreciate it!!.....C
Christina,
There’s nothing simple about your poem! It is simply an honest emotive write encased in a blanket of love! Exquisite!
~Laura~
Thank you so much Laura! I really appreciate your compliments!
You’re very welcome!
A wonderful write Christina. May your grandchildren be as wonderful as ours are. Andy.
Thank you so much Andy, I have no doubt. 🙂 Christina
A fine write Christina. I did not swoon! lol.
Thanks Steve. No swoon??? LOL
There you go!
Excellent!
Thanks so much for your kind review!!
A wonderful expression of loving devotion and am sure one day your grandchildren will delight in reading this ballad to lasting love........ thank you for the share dear Christina.
Thank you very much for the kind review! So much appreciated!
of course he liked it ..
I bet he loved it knowing you have each other, forsaking all others for always must be bliss......... well poemed C... N
Thank you Neville for reviewing my poem......much appreciated!!!........C
pleasure and mine ..
Love in Maturity framed in a paradigm
Cheese in maturity smells more in time.
Sorry couldn't resist - fine poem Christina.
Thank you for that fine rhyme, Michael!! Loved it! Appreciate the review......Christina
HOLA CHRIS ~ BRIAN AQUI ~ Gracias por un otra Poema d'Amor ! Stanza 1. True love always opens our eyes 2. True Love survives through TIME 3. True Love survives all TESTS 4. True Love anticipates a Happy Future 5. True Love is for ETERNITY ! Thanks for your LOVE POEMS ~ they help ANGELA & I to endure our separation with perfect confidence in OUR TRUE LOVE ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Love to YOU & YOURS
Angela & Brian 🧡💙🧡💙🧡💙🧡
Thanks Brian for such a gracious reply to my poem. I have no doubt you and Angela will have a bright and happy future!! .....Christina
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