Singular I’s

Neville

Singular I’s

 

The more

I think

 

I think

About us

 

Then the 

More I realise

 

There is no

Us, is there

 

Today we

Are no more


Than a pair of

Singular I’s

 

Oh’ and a few

Loosely scattered


Obsolete were’s

For good measure

 

That’s all

We are now


Summed up

On a lonely page  

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 14th, 2019 02:36
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Andrew Charles Forrest

    🙁

    • Neville

      cheers sir and all that bloomin jazz.... N 🙂

    • Fay Slimm.

      Sad but inevitable the procession from nearness to singular when love gets forgotten and lonely wings in.......... a telling write Nev and penned with your usual short-line style it has such a poignant feel....................... Fay

      • Neville

        many thanks from here to there Fay..... N x

      • orchidee

        Doh! I'm all in a tizzy.
        Am I 'I', 'Me'. 'or 'Myself'? Or am I 'You'?
        Nope, I can't be you, cos you are you!
        I'm digging this hole deeper, and I'm in it.... lol.
        (Take a purple pill or two, Orchi).

        • Neville

          thank you orchidee... sounds like a good idea...

        • sylviasearcher

          You know you just snapped my attention with the formatting.

          The lonely page

          My favourite line 😊

          • Neville

            That's good to hear.. thank you

            • sylviasearcher

              Oh I thought you might say that that was obvious?

              • Neville

                Nothing ever is these days... but I'm gonna thank you again, just in case I missed something & because I can.... thank you..

              • FineB

                Hi Neville,

                A wonderful, imaginative write.

                Keep writing FineB

                • Neville

                  Thank you FineB, I intend to try...... N

                • Michael Edwards

                  Singularly good write Neville
                  😊

                  • Neville

                    thank you sir.... N

                  • Christina8

                    A bit of a sad write for today but very well penned.

                    • Neville

                      thanks Christina...

                    • PoeticBiscuit

                      I very much enjoy the formatting of your poems, they’re always so appealing to the eyes.

                      • Neville

                        How very kind of you, so thank you kindly..... N

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Wonderfully emotive write Neville.

                        • Neville

                          Bless you Goldie my friend.... N

                        • SerenWise

                          Beautifully written, elegant yet simple

                          • Neville

                            How very kind SerenWise, many thanks to you... N

                          • Suresh

                            In reality it's always been only an "I", the we and the us was are imposed relationships.

                            No regrets

                            • Neville

                              Well I never did... good to hear and good to hear from you Suresh my friend... and thank you... N



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