Fay Slimm





Eastern the rhythm as dancing begins.

Practiced fluidity.

Gliding vibration of smooth undulation.

Transparent quiver of veils airy wings.

Bared sensuality. 

Stunning production of pelvis pulsation.

Entrancing the swirl of seductive spins.

Twirled spontaneity.

Skirt's silken fringes shake by gyration.

Bangled wrists shiver in twisting rings. 

Mounting carnality.

Viewers call loudly bestirred by elation.

Oriental performance an audience wins.


  • Neville

    Tis amazing how they do that ..

    Tis amazing how you capture movement so dear Fay..

    I'm more a hand jive kinda guy..... N

    • Fay Slimm

      I love to watch sinuous movement by dancers and enjoyed writing about the effect on audiences but ditto with your mention of dancing style Nev cos what gets me going the most is jive - - a pleasure to know you liked the read however - - thanking you kindly............... Fay

      • Neville

        Now ya talkin....... N

      • orchidee

        A fine write Fay. Fido my watchdog won't let me have any 'carnality'! lol.

        • Fay Slimm

          Glad you thought the write fine dear Orchi.

        • Andrew Charles Forrest

          It all in the heat Fay
          Excellent write

          • Fay Slimm

            Yes the heat is where movement thrives Andrew- - pleased you enjoyed my piece on the gift of dancers and how they perfect sensuality.

          • Michael Edwards

            It's not fair - here's me about to have my knee done and you foist those thoughts in my excited brain box. Down Edwards!!! i

            • Fay Slimm

              Gusson with ee Michael - a bit of the sensual is givin' thy brain box somethin'to think on afore the morrow.......... we at MPS will be thinking of you dear friend and ready to say welcome back really soon........... Fay

            • Suresh

              You have truly captured the rythm of the Eastern dancing, where the female displays her art for the pleasure of the opposite sex, I dearly love the rythm of the Latin dances, rumba, samba, paso doble where the movement of the couple is erotically sensual.
              Love the poem

              • Fay Slimm

                Yes Suresh the rhythm excites dancer and audience in these sensual eastern dances - so fluid the movements I felt they deserved my little tribute - glad you enjoyed the read.

              • FineB

                Hello Fay,

                What an awesome, amazing write.

                The beautiful Britt Ekland defined beauty as sensuality.

                She said in a interview along the lines irregardless of our physical appearance the underlying factor is sensuality. If we are sensual we are beautiful.

                Your poem shows that within a person being sensual lies a breathtaking beauty all ita own.

                Keep writing FineB

                • Fay Slimm

                  What an understanding your comment presents to those who dismiss eastern dancing as trivial - for beauty is certainly found in the fluidity of sensual movement and thank you Fine B for your thoughtful comment after reading my little tribute.

                • ANGELA & BRIAN

                  Hi FAY - Angela here 8:30 am Friday ! Loved the Poem & the Picture. Belly Dancing is by Title & Tickle Sensuous - love to watch it & try it. Flamenco is also sensuous but more subtle. We have Moroccan influences in Andalucia and the exposed Navel (with an embedded Gemstone !) is considered both Sensual & Sacred ! I love to watch the reactions of Brian (and other red-blooded men) as the Dance proceeds it enlivens all the senses and leaves nothing to the imagination ! I am much too modest to ever be a Professional Belly Dancer ! Brian is very proud when I dance Flamenco but would draw the line @ Belly Dancing especially as we are engaged to be married ! Thanks for sharing a very elegant Poem - in both Form & Function !

                  Blessings & Peace & Joy
                  Love ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

                  • Fay Slimm

                    Yes the dance stimulates and no doubt about it so I back Brian in drawing that line - yet Flamenco being more subtle is still beautiful in fluidity etc......... so pleased you enjoyed the little tribute I gave to the experienced dancers who perfect their movements by sensuous style. Hugs to you Angela knowing October will soon speed your love on his way.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Wonderful write Fay, i could see the gyrations in my mind.

                    • Fay Slimm

                      Yes the gyrations called Eastern dancing are perfected by those who practice fluidity which is amazing to watch. Thanks for your supportive comment dear Andy.

                    • dusk arising

                      and I thought I was going to get to watch a video of her..... cheated!

                      Never found professional lady dancers feminine enough to appeal to be honest. Sexy and sensual yes, but something missing.

                      Now a good dancer with her partner down at the club can be something else, as she carefully avoids stepping on all the watching fella's tongues.

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