Fly Me in Circles

Neville

Fly Me in Circles

 

These words were conceived

During a mid summer storm

While making love slow

To a very special friend indeed

 

And they are our words

Or rather they are now hers

Since she begged me for a poem

That she might call her very own

 

And so, I made her this

The precise moment that she bit her lip

And made my shoulder bleed

Such moments are very rare indeed

 

Oh baby take away this ache

Take them when the storm is done

And raptors cry aloft as one

Then in circles, take me take me take me….

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 20th, 2019 00:13
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments8

  • Christina8

    This is a beautiful poem filled with feeling and tenderness toward your dear friend. I feel as though I am a fly on the wall of a very tender experience......well done!

    • Neville

      thank you for taking a peek Christina... Neville thanks thee...

    • Goldfinch60

      Beautiful loving words Neville, may those circles keep you safe in your lovers soul.

      • Neville

        cheers my golden friend and true....

      • Fay Slimm.

        Slow making of love in a summer storm reads so engagingly good as does your tenderly potent poem my friend.

        • Neville

          It certainly wakes ya up.... thank you kindly Fay..... N

        • orchidee

          Now I don't know these things - did she bite her lip and make your shoulder bleed at the same time? But how, at the same time?! How were her gnashers?!
          And are you going round in circles? Where ya going? So many questions......

          • Neville

            I could tell ya but a gentleman never tells and even if I was not a gentleman and told ya.. I would then have to kill ya...

            • orchidee

              Fido says he does not want any 'ardour'. He says he knows how she did both at once. She had false teeth! So she bit her lip, and bit you with the false teeth. lol.

            • sylviasearcher

              Even though these could well be the words of a player, they played so well indeed!

              • Neville

                thanks a bundle Sylviasearcher... what's a player tho...

                • sylviasearcher

                  Like an artist? Maybe?

                  • 2 more comments

                • dusk arising

                  An intimate moment between lovers beautifully portrayed.

                  • Neville

                    bless you bruv ... N

                  • Laura🌻

                    Neville,

                    Love the title of your well crafted poem!
                    A delightful read!
                    Thank you for sharing!

                    ~Laura~

                    • Neville

                      I thank you for checking in and considering these words my friend.. indeed, I do... N

                    • Michael Edwards

                      This seems so personal and so tender - fine write N

                      • Neville

                        thank you kindly Michael... N



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