Fly Me in Circles
These words were conceived
During a mid summer storm
While making love slow
To a very special friend indeed
And they are our words
Or rather they are now hers
Since she begged me for a poem
That she might call her very own
And so, I made her this
The precise moment that she bit her lip
And made my shoulder bleed
Such moments are very rare indeed
Oh baby take away this ache
Take them when the storm is done
And raptors cry aloft as one
Then in circles, take me take me take me….
- Author: Neville ( Offline)
- Published: August 20th, 2019 00:13
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 32
Comments8
This is a beautiful poem filled with feeling and tenderness toward your dear friend. I feel as though I am a fly on the wall of a very tender experience......well done!
thank you for taking a peek Christina... Neville thanks thee...
Beautiful loving words Neville, may those circles keep you safe in your lovers soul.
cheers my golden friend and true....
Slow making of love in a summer storm reads so engagingly good as does your tenderly potent poem my friend.
It certainly wakes ya up.... thank you kindly Fay..... N
Now I don't know these things - did she bite her lip and make your shoulder bleed at the same time? But how, at the same time?! How were her gnashers?!
And are you going round in circles? Where ya going? So many questions......
I could tell ya but a gentleman never tells and even if I was not a gentleman and told ya.. I would then have to kill ya...
Fido says he does not want any 'ardour'. He says he knows how she did both at once. She had false teeth! So she bit her lip, and bit you with the false teeth. lol.
Even though these could well be the words of a player, they played so well indeed!
thanks a bundle Sylviasearcher... what's a player tho...
Like an artist? Maybe?
Thank you what a lovely thing to say...
I can be lovely sometimes you know!
An intimate moment between lovers beautifully portrayed.
bless you bruv ... N
Neville,
Love the title of your well crafted poem!
A delightful read!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
I thank you for checking in and considering these words my friend.. indeed, I do... N
This seems so personal and so tender - fine write N
thank you kindly Michael... N
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