Try your luck and never give up

Poetic Dan

We are far from the animals that we know, I only have two eyes and two arms to flow.

 

They are many and all kinds of sort, air, land or sea there are plenty to be.

 

As I comprehend them, they don't comprehend me, all in our shells moving in harmony.

 

Joined in our spirits to adventure and explore, life is the key to an open door with the intention for you to be imperfectly perfectly who you are.

 

Spirit of the animal
Atom of the Stars
Only thing to do
Is try our luck

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 3rd, 2019 08:25
  • Comment from author about the poem: Ramblings from my mind as I try find the reason that I rhyme. Working with animals is a great reward, still not sure on the humans but I'm learning to keep my mouth shut. Unless the vibration is brought to me, then my spirit animals take charge, mother nature has given me all I need to know. Don't tell and you won't be told
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Comments5

  • Neville

    an intriguing little poem sir..... N

    • Poetic Dan

      Than you my friend it was satisfying to pen!

    • Michael Edwards

      Not quite sure what to make of this which makes it ever more intriguing - and, yes, I did enjoy the read.

      • Poetic Dan

        That is a delightful comment to read my friend, always appreciated

      • Clara

        Excellent PD,

        I take it as there are such differences between ourselves as human beings and animals... And then such differences between the animals themselves. But yet, it is fine to be as we are... Imperfections and all... Embracing all of our differences and just making the most of life!

        Wonderful poem as always. I look forward to reading what you post.

        CLARA X

        • Poetic Dan

          Yes living in the moments and enjoying life is key, in so lucky to work with dogs for ever day they remind me. The present is all we have.
          Always appreciated thank you

        • FineB

          Hello Poetic Dan,

          What a great poem.

          It's TRUE we should never give up in life.

          Life is to be lived to the full and to enjoy the beauty all around us that it brings us such as the animal kingdom.

          Keep writing FineB

          • Poetic Dan

            Always appreciated my friend let the animals show us the way!

          • Goldfinch60

            If only the 'spirit of the animal' could bring their peaceful existence to homo sapiens.

            • Poetic Dan

              We can only keep listening and learning, always appreciated my friend.



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