Suave.

Fay Slimm.

 

Suave.

 

Very imposing

enters suave September.

Marvelously

glossy as autumn should be.

Wearing brown

top-coat, collared in velvet.

The costume

no season selected but He.

 

Sleek chestnut

hatted, swinging gold cane.

Glorious

September struts back again.

 

I wish you were here to see 

it with me.

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 5th, 2019 02:44
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  • dusk arising

    Clothed in a gold leaf of majestic royal foliage I would proudly parade with you through those avenues of autumnal beauty, delighting in each step, a debonaire march of pleasure.

    Autumn - the colours of sun brought to earth.

    • Fay Slimm.

      Am so pleased you were inspired to write such an inviting comment D. and will be deilghted to join you in a virtual walk to soak up those autumnal colours.

    • Goldfinch60

      Beautiful words Fay, those browns and golds will soon change to reds and oranges and autumn will paint nature with its beautiful colours.

      • Fay Slimm.

        Yes the changes in hue and tint at this time of year has always taken my poetic eye Andy - - thank you for your lovely warm comment on nature's brushwork which starts in September.

      • Neville

        the view is to die for...

        another autumn..... how they do come round....... a majestic scene you create here in words...

        the tools of a poet... Neville

        • Fay Slimm.

          Thank you ever so Nev......... hoping you are getting the September colour-change too as it inspires so many poetic tools of expression for me.................

          • Neville

            tis poetry................ N

          • FineB

            Hello Fay.

            A wonderful tribute to Autumn.

            Good write.

            Keep writing FineB


            • Fay Slimm.

              Hello to you too my friend and many thank yous for the visit and comment in my small tribute to Autumn.

            • orchidee

              A fine write Fay. Yes, another Autumn. But we say 'Oh, no not another birthday, cos we're all 21 again!'

              • Fay Slimm.

                Thank you for your thoughts on autumn dear Orchi.

              • ANGELA & BRIAN

                ANGELA HERE (10pm Thursday) ! Thanks for sharing FAY ! Its SPRING here so Im missing SEPTEMBER in the UK (and Brians 36th BIRTHDAY !) Love AUTUMN must be fab in CORNWALL. The picture reminded Me of my new Blonde Look ! I blame the SUN & SEAWATER ! BRIAN wont recognise Me - til I KISSSSSSSSSS HIM ! I always remember that kind of September & Follow !

                Blessings & Peace & Joy
                Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡

                • Fay Slimm.

                  Your comments are always so welcome and thank you dear Angela for dropping by and reading my tribute to September's colours of change............... sun-blond or not I bet Brian will recognise your smile of delight when his plane touches down next month................ love Fay xxxx

                • Clara

                  This creates such a lovely image. The words feel almost warm and inviting. Like you could just step into it and be embraced by autumn's golden touch. Beautiful.

                  CLARA X

                  • Fay Slimm.

                    A big thank you Clara for such an encouraging comment on my little tribute to September's colour-change - - so pleased you felt in the picture as you were reading as autumn is a poignant time of the year.................. warmly from Fay x

                  • Seek

                    A fine tribute to a golden time of year. Beautifully written, Fay.

                    • Fay Slimm.

                      As you state Seek this time of the year in our part of the world is golden indeed. Thank you for such a lovely comment.

                    • Michael Edwards

                      A real beauty Fay - love it.



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