AS NIGHT DISPLACES

Michael Edwards

 

 

AS NIGHT DISPLACES 

 

An untamed sea which sets its rules

sends tumbling surging rhythmic waves

in frenzied flow across the bay

where sea and sky

sit ill defined

as night displaces day.

  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 7th, 2019 00:09
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments7

  • Neville

    Near perfect Michael ...

    Now do I have a nice cuppa tea or a big mug of cocoa this chilly mane...

    Neville

    • Michael Edwards

      It's coffee for me but I'll do you a cocoa - actually I am in need of one right now.

    • Fay Slimm.

      I felt that saline surge as I read this little gem Michael - - great watercolour too.

    • Goldfinch60

      Beautiful- both the words and the artwork.

      • Michael Edwards

        It was a commission about 18 months ago - thanks Andy.

      • orchidee

        A fine write and pic M - and the poor folk in the path of the hurricane.

      • dusk arising

        I scent the salted air and hear the pebbles rumble as they're clawed by the hungry tide.
        Great atmospheric piece ME.

      • Clara

        Wonderful. As said before, such an atmospheric piece of work.

        CLARA X

      • Andrew Charles Forrest

        Oh the colours! Michael
        Ill defined but wonderful in their description

        • Michael Edwards

          Thanks for your kind comments Andrew.



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