Sailing to Eternity.

Goldfinch60



Artwork by Michael Edwards

 

 

 

The sea so smooth beneath the hull,

The yacht sailing on, in the lull,

Ahead the world’s oceans to see,

Traveling towards eternity.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 10th, 2019 01:10
  • Comment from author about the poem: I saw Michael Edwards' artwork yesterday and had to write some words reflecting what I saw.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 22
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  • Michael Edwards

    Thanks so much Andy - I'll keep this super write to go with the picture

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Michael, I just had to say something about it.

    • orchidee

      A fine write and pic Gold.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thanks Orchi, the picture is Michaels.

        • orchidee

          Where ya going sailing?!

        • dusk arising

          I couldn't help but see an analogy with a sleeping child in your words today goldfinch.
          A rather beautiful thought.

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you d a, yes I see what you mean.

          • Alan .S. Jeeves

            The wind blows gently yet we will still arrive.

            Ex animo, Alan

            • Goldfinch60

              So true Alan.

              Andy.

            • Andrew Charles Forrest

              Well expressed Andy the words and the picture fit perfectly together

              • Goldfinch60

                Yes I had hoped they would Andrew. Thank you.

              • Neville

                Beauty replicated upon the page on which more beauty sits and waves.... N

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you for those fine words Neville.

                • Christina8

                  What a beautiful poem to go with Michael's artwork!!

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you Christina, much appreciated.

                  • ANGELA & BRIAN

                    THANKS UNCLE ANDY ~ BRIAN here (Angela fast asleep in BED 2:30 am !). I like ROD but hes still croaking as badly as ever ! Love the symbiosis of the PIC & POEM ! I have plagerised Mikes in the past ~ they are so so musing !
                    Love the POEM ~ in essence we are all sailing towards Eternity ~ AMEN !

                    Blessings & Peace for You & JOYCE
                    Love BRIAN & ANGELA💙🧡💙🧡💙

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Thank you Brian. I always ask Michael if I can use his artwork in my poems before I publish them.

                      Yes we will all going to eternity.



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