Correction
Correct me if I’m right
Correct me if I’m wrong
Correct me if I tell the truth
Or stray inside your thong
Correct me if I fail to please
Correct the enthusiastic futile squeeze
Perhaps a yard or more beyond
Those sun burnt knees I stand corrected
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: just a bit o fun....
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Comments9
If you are wrong take 100 lines and write:
"In my life I am more often right than wrong so do not need any correction!"
that may apply to you Goldie but I think maybe I'm beyond saving .... cheers my friend... and have a good day ...
Neville
Correct me if I'm wrong but this is very right
write on Michael... I must have been feeling a bit, well I dunno what really when this little scribble was originally penned.....
Cheers, Neville
Correct me, or rather come help me, if I swoon!
Thank you for taking a little peek Orchidee.... I'm sure you will be just fine...
Neville
Ha - - your talent for making me smile with your play on words is always so right my and never fails to please - - -
thank you dear lady, friend and poet.......
Neville
The phrased damned if you do etc etc comes to mind
Tongue in check of a write Neville BRAVO!
thanks Charles and muchly meant too....
Lots to be read into this little ditty. Creative poetic minds will run wild with this today. My own thoughts are of course disgraceful but hey-ho.
Love the sun burnt knees touch.
It seems we were checking each others posts out at precisely the same time.... thanks my friend... I Kinda like your oldie better than my own scribble today....... N
This is a fun little ditty though well written I may add! 🙂
thank you Christina.. I thought something little more lighthearted for a change.... 🙂
At first I read the last word as "erect", and you can imagine where my mind went......
I stand corrected...
Go and stand in the naughty corner.... Cheers, N
YYYYAAAAA!!! did that too, and a lot when growing up.....
Interesting!
thank you..
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