Neville

Correction

Correction

 

Correct me if I’m right

Correct me if I’m wrong

 

Correct me if I tell the truth

Or stray inside your thong

 

Correct me if I fail to please

Correct the enthusiastic futile squeeze

 

Perhaps a yard or more beyond

Those sun burnt knees I stand corrected

 

Comments10

  • Goldfinch60

    If you are wrong take 100 lines and write:

    "In my life I am more often right than wrong so do not need any correction!"

    • Neville

      that may apply to you Goldie but I think maybe I'm beyond saving .... cheers my friend... and have a good day ...

      Neville

    • Michael Edwards

      Correct me if I'm wrong but this is very right

      • Neville

        write on Michael... I must have been feeling a bit, well I dunno what really when this little scribble was originally penned.....

        Cheers, Neville

      • orchidee

        Correct me, or rather come help me, if I swoon!

        • Neville

          Thank you for taking a little peek Orchidee.... I'm sure you will be just fine...

          Neville

        • Fay Slimm

          Ha - - your talent for making me smile with your play on words is always so right my and never fails to please - - -

          • Neville

            thank you dear lady, friend and poet.......

            Neville

          • Andrew Charles Forrest

            The phrased damned if you do etc etc comes to mind
            Tongue in check of a write Neville BRAVO!

            • Neville

              thanks Charles and muchly meant too....

            • dusk arising

              Lots to be read into this little ditty. Creative poetic minds will run wild with this today. My own thoughts are of course disgraceful but hey-ho.

              Love the sun burnt knees touch.

              • Neville

                It seems we were checking each others posts out at precisely the same time.... thanks my friend... I Kinda like your oldie better than my own scribble today....... N

              • Christina8

                This is a fun little ditty though well written I may add! :)

                • Neville

                  thank you Christina.. I thought something little more lighthearted for a change.... :)

                • James Michael

                  That thong might need to be in the correct position for insertion! 😜

                  • Neville

                    Nah' the thong remains the thame ..... thank you tho for that cheeky little peek sir... All peeks welcome.. Neville

                  • Suresh

                    At first I read the last word as "erect", and you can imagine where my mind went......
                    I stand corrected...

                    • Neville

                      Go and stand in the naughty corner.... Cheers, N

                      • Suresh

                        YYYYAAAAA!!! did that too, and a lot when growing up.....

                      • SerenWise

                        Interesting!

                        • Neville

                          thank you..



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