big old moon (love)

dusk arising

 

there was a big cold moon up in the sky tonite
as i walked away from you
saw that big old moon in your eyes tonite
loving eyes of china blue

big old moon will freeze the ground tonite
but he won't touch me or you
that big old moon makes me feel alright
he knows you love me too

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 12th, 2019 04:02
  • Comment from author about the poem: This is a little thing i wrote exactly thirty years ago
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Neville

    Quite beautiful & without doubt, timeless...

    Neville

    • dusk arising

      Thanks Neville. Written as another memory jogger for me.

      • Neville

        gotcha.....

      • Fay Slimm.

        True love never fades with time passing by D. - loved the rhyming and tender assurance in these few lines.

        • dusk arising

          Well i was all loved up when i wrote this wasn't i. Thank you Fay.

        • Poetic Dan

          Fantastic!

          • dusk arising

            But it was true. Recounts one cold evening on her mum's doorstep.

          • Bragee

            simple and extremely satisfying love poem!
            Great writing.

          • Suresh

            What memories could have inspired to recall these words,

            • dusk arising

              These words were written 30 years ago for me to read today and be right back there in those magic moments. Thanks Suresh.

            • Michael Edwards

              A great write dusk

            • Goldfinch60

              Superb loving write d a.

              • dusk arising

                See, I was a softy even 30 years ago. Thanks Goldfinch.



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