there was a big cold moon up in the sky tonite
as i walked away from you
saw that big old moon in your eyes tonite
loving eyes of china blue
big old moon will freeze the ground tonite
but he won't touch me or you
that big old moon makes me feel alright
he knows you love me too
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dusk arising (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This is a little thing i wrote exactly thirty years ago
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Comments7
Quite beautiful & without doubt, timeless...
Neville
Thanks Neville. Written as another memory jogger for me.
gotcha.....
True love never fades with time passing by D. - loved the rhyming and tender assurance in these few lines.
Well i was all loved up when i wrote this wasn't i. Thank you Fay.
Fantastic!
But it was true. Recounts one cold evening on her mum's doorstep.
simple and extremely satisfying love poem!
Great writing.
Thank you Bragee.
What memories could have inspired to recall these words,
These words were written 30 years ago for me to read today and be right back there in those magic moments. Thanks Suresh.
A great write dusk
Thank you ME.
Superb loving write d a.
See, I was a softy even 30 years ago. Thanks Goldfinch.
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