Neville

Food for Thought

Food for Thought

 

There upon

An ancient

Quilt she lay

 

Pretending

In a kind of

Shy way

 

To hide

From him

Wrapped

 

Tho loosely

In her favorite

Rice-paper negligee

 

Yes twas then

She said you’ll never

Starve luv

 

No not in

A month of

Sundays

 

Comments9

  • orchidee

    I shall swoon if you eat that negligee! lol.

    • Neville

      I'm more of a savory kinda guy myself...thanks O... N

    • Poetic Dan

      Delicious morning bite!

      • Neville

        Ah' that'll do for starters.... many thanks PD.. much appreciated sir.... N

      • Fay Slimm

        There for the eating was Love - - covered in rice paper no less - your lines are always wrapped in much food for thought my poet-friend - - have a good weekend........... Fay

        • Neville

          Thank you Fay... and a great weekend to you too......

        • Michael Edwards

          Inspired - a melt in your mouth kind of poem - great work.

          • Neville

            Thank you Michael.... tis appreciated...

          • Andrew Charles Forrest

            Edible Neville
            Simply edible

            • Neville

              very sweet of you I Must say.... cheers Andrew sir..... N

            • FineB

              Hello Neville,

              An enchanting write

              .Superb!

              Keep writing FineB

              • Neville

                thank you friend...

              • Christina8

                A yummy write Nev.! Very well done. Have a wonderful weekend!

                • Neville

                  thank you my dear.. you too...

                • dusk arising

                  Sounds absolutely edible mate. Get fat!

                  • Neville

                    Cheers.....

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Ah breakfast!

                    • Neville

                      makes a change from seed pods n meal worms eh.... cheers GF60...



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