Neville

Client

Client

 

She was more than just an accessory

Although the judge and jury

Declined to admit

They were each

To her a

Man

 

?

 

Client

 

She was more than just an accessory

Although the judge and jury

Decided to admit her

Amen   

 

?

 

 

 

Comments9

  • sylviasearcher

    Well I read quite a lot into these clever lines...

    • Neville

      There are intentional hidden depths and a single universal truth within.... thank you for looking beyond the words... Neville

      • sylviasearcher

        A single universal truth?

        Hmmm that is bold indeed...

      • Fay Slimm

        Letting that be so is wisest methinks......... clients are clients of all sorts of people.......... another to ponder on Nev.............

        • Neville

          thank you Fay for checking in today... pondersome was my intention, so you are very nearly there..... Neville

          • Fay Slimm

            Had another slow read and see her predicament - - before judge and jury who to her had been clients would be no advantage now- - hence the Amen............... poor little hooker.

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          • dusk arising

            An accessory to the crime of..... mmmm.... nay she was the prize for ten bob and a half hour of fun.
            She knew how to find justice in his old bailey once she had his wig off and doing her jury service was a sunday regular......

            ...... it's all there as my perverse mind grapples with the opportunities presented by you today.

            Some said 'let her dangle' others had community service in mind.

            • Neville

              you sir are most perceptive.....give the guy a cigar...... N

            • Christina8

              Interesting twist on words on these clever lines....alot can be read into them

              • Neville

                thank you kindly Christina... N

              • orchidee

                I of course didn't see the hidden single universal truth! lol.

                • Neville

                  you need to concentrate more ....

                  • orchidee

                    But I might swoon if I look too far....!

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                  • Poetic Dan

                    Tick... Tick.... Boom!
                    Thank you

                    • Neville

                      thank you.... N

                    • Michael Edwards

                      Well I'm still pondericating but I guess dusk sums it up best. an intriguing write.

                      • Neville

                        maybe.. but I'm gonna thank you any way... thank you any way....

                      • kevin browne

                        The captivating saying of judge and jury, but there's no mention of the executionist in this well crafted crafty, watch out below the Judges seat before she'd be paid for some under the desk work. As for as the executionare well he landed a pretty blow on his rent arrears...

                        • Neville

                          Cheers my friend.. a much appreciated visit and true..... N

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Captivating write Neville, it needs several reads as so much can be seen in it. Thank you for waking my brain this morning.

                          • Neville

                            I am well and truly honoured by your comment GF60..



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