Client
She was more than just an accessory
Although the judge and jury
Declined to admit
They were each
To her a
Man
?
Client
She was more than just an accessory
Although the judge and jury
Decided to admit her
Amen
?
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Author:
Neville (
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Well I read quite a lot into these clever lines...
There are intentional hidden depths and a single universal truth within.... thank you for looking beyond the words... Neville
A single universal truth?
Hmmm that is bold indeed...
Letting that be so is wisest methinks......... clients are clients of all sorts of people.......... another to ponder on Nev.............
thank you Fay for checking in today... pondersome was my intention, so you are very nearly there..... Neville
Had another slow read and see her predicament - - before judge and jury who to her had been clients would be no advantage now- - hence the Amen............... poor little hooker.
Bravo.... and thank you ..
An accessory to the crime of..... mmmm.... nay she was the prize for ten bob and a half hour of fun.
She knew how to find justice in his old bailey once she had his wig off and doing her jury service was a sunday regular......
...... it's all there as my perverse mind grapples with the opportunities presented by you today.
Some said 'let her dangle' others had community service in mind.
you sir are most perceptive.....give the guy a cigar...... N
Interesting twist on words on these clever lines....alot can be read into them
thank you kindly Christina... N
I of course didn't see the hidden single universal truth! lol.
you need to concentrate more ....
But I might swoon if I look too far....!
you might but it aint gonna kill ya..... Nobody died from swooning...
Can I risk it?!
Tick... Tick.... Boom!
Thank you
thank you.... N
Well I'm still pondericating but I guess dusk sums it up best. an intriguing write.
maybe.. but I'm gonna thank you any way... thank you any way....
The captivating saying of judge and jury, but there's no mention of the executionist in this well crafted crafty, watch out below the Judges seat before she'd be paid for some under the desk work. As for as the executionare well he landed a pretty blow on his rent arrears...
Cheers my friend.. a much appreciated visit and true..... N
Captivating write Neville, it needs several reads as so much can be seen in it. Thank you for waking my brain this morning.
I am well and truly honoured by your comment GF60..
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