Walk your path well

Poetic Dan

Space invaders need to get a grip, not every thing you see needs your company.

 

I'm forever working with nervous creatures that want reassuring that nothing will try to claim their space or suddenly appear in their face.

 

Yet there's all types of humans that do not understand, a dog does not need a muzzle just because you can't control your hands.

 

Mother nature has rules and it's not written on stone, this is something you already own.

 

There is no blame game in the jungle of this world, each vessel has the right to protect its self.

 

As we become more aware of the energy in and around us, that connects every atom and cell.

 

Don't be an invader
Walk your path well

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 17th, 2019 00:51
  • Comment from author about the poem: Up early again to get off my trigger train!
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  • Michael Edwards

    Chose your path well and when you find it walk tall - great write Dan

    • Poetic Dan

      Always appreciated my friend

    • kevin browne

      This is encouraging for the readers who don't walk their path well. Sometimes when people see you doing well they may just attempt to jump alongside you and sometimes that can be a distraction, however, there is none of this through your enlightenment to heal your self-worth. Nice writes to make people reflect on their lives...

      • Poetic Dan

        Well my finger tips are just in the positive stream of life but this was written a few days ago! I don't even want to write what's on my mind, thank you for giving all the time that you do.

        Always appreciated my friend!

      • Goldfinch60

        Super write, we should each walk our path with respect to others.

        • Poetic Dan

          This pathway is not blocked and I'm slowly trying to find a new one my friend.

          Respect and trust are my issue at the moment, thank you for your constant words of encouragement.

        • orchidee

          I did not walk my path well. The path ended in a cliff. No one heard me call for hheeelllllllllpppppp!!. Impression of me falling off the cliff there! lol.

          • Poetic Dan

            That's only for you to know but at least you was saved and still here 😉

            Always appreciated

          • dusk arising

            Your fourth line contains a truth which i truly wish more could see. There is so much within us Dan which we will not find until we begin to look for it. It's plain to see for your readers that you have found a great deal of wisdom from within with maybe a little prompting from elsewhere when you uttered 'help'.

            A great and encouraging piece from you today m8.
            "Go placidly amid the noise and haste, and remember what peace there may be in silence". - Max Ehrmann

            • Poetic Dan

              Well my turmoil is still lingering and this was written a few day ago after working with another dog that so misunderstood (by its owners too)

              Some how as I read your words and yesterdays, there is a tear that brings all this complicated pain.

              I'm now sitting by the sea, ready to try and understand what this feeling is!

              Much peace and respect
              Always appreciated
              Thank you for all your time!

              • dusk arising

                Maybe you have tears because the world isn't quite a beautiful as we'd like it to be. It's not easy to 'go placidly amid the noise and haste' etc because there are obstacles and many of the obstacles are other people. Maybe your tears are in the spirit of 'if only the world - my world - was really like that'.... tears of longing maybe. I hope i'm not too far off the mark, but it's only a suggestion.

                • Poetic Dan

                  That you are not my friend! A view that made me feel a bit more at peace!

                • Alta H Mabin

                  A wonderful encouraging write.

                  • Poetic Dan

                    Always appreciated my friend
                    Thank you



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