Perky pyramids

Alta H Mabin

 

 

love is beautiful
between perky pyramids
avoiding the heart

  • Author: Alta H Mabin (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 19th, 2019 00:03
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 14
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  • dusk arising

    Love is beautiful in all it's forms yes. But those perky pyramids can be such a lustful distraction.

    • Alta H Mabin

      A beautiful distraction indeed.

    • Michael Edwards

      Sweet

    • Goldfinch60

      Yes love is beautiful, more so if you can avoid the beautiful pyramids and reach the heart

      Love is beautiful,
      Avoiding the pyramids,
      And reaching the heart.

    • orchidee

      Them perky things will make me swoon! But then again, so does anything remotely 'hot'! heehee.
      Erm, I can only guess you are in Egypt. I wouldn't know what else them pyramids are. Hmmm, lol.

    • orchidee

      You knows really, Orchi - dark horse! heehee.

    • Neville

      who dont love a perky pyramid eh...

    • FredPeyer

      Alta, your short poem really got me thinking. Maybe I am overthinking this, but without the heart it ain't love, even though it can be beautiful.

      • Alta H Mabin

        Hi Fred, thank you for your thoughts. To clarify, this was written about how we often seek pleasures before the heart stuff. I truly appreciate your thoughts on this.



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