ridiculous organism

dusk arising

 

Is this ridiculous organism
really what we are?
Our brain possesses powers
beyond imagination.
Yet we seek to cheat and steal,
wage war and control.
Lust for lusts sake and
we procreate irresponsibly.
All made in the image of god?
Is this ridiculous organism
really what we are?
Or is there something finer
to be sought inside us all?

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 19th, 2019 00:05
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • User favorite of this poem: Poetic Dan.
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Comments6

  • Michael Edwards

    There really is but sadly many never find it - great first read today.

  • Goldfinch60

    There is a fineness in us all but many are too self indulgent to see it and show it to others.

  • orchidee

    I could say more on the 'spiritual' side of things - that's the 'only' or best answer I can give. Or a reply, if it may not be an answer.

  • Neville

    Jeez.. you ask the million dollar question.... and you ask it so well..

  • Fay Slimm.

    Really apt questions D.A. - - there is I believe a very different being inside each of us waiting to be given a chance - --- thanks for this read my friend.

  • Poetic Dan

    From the beginning I've never really believed anything anyone told me, so I'm well open to us being whatever we can imagine.

    Awesome work my Friend!

    • Poetic Dan

      Mostly in CAPITALS!



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