All Was Right.

Sitting in the care home,

My lover at my side,

Her friend sitting with us,

Chatting and laughing.

The window slightly open,

When it happened.

A feather floated in,

We picked it up

And looked at it in awe,

As I knew,

I knew an Angel was with them,

With them,

Caring for them.

I knew that all was fine,

And all would be okay,

As their friendship was strong,

And all was right in their world.


  • orchidee

    A fine write Gold. A sign there - a feather from an angel's wing!

    • Goldfinch60

      Thanks Orchi, yes I always say that, the angels are looking after her.

    • Michael Edwards

      Ah this so uplifting - may the feather ever be with them.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Michael, that feather will be with them when I take this poem in for them both.

      • Fay Slimm

        A wonderful help both the feather and poem and your dear one and her friend will now always be cared for . Thank you for sharing the experience with us my friend.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you for your kind words Fay.

        • Unsub


          so many spend (waste) their lives waiting for God, when alll we need is a simple sign that all is ok.

          Nature restores your faith in the world.

          Angels for me are positive vibrational entities.

          Perfect poem to brighten my day!


          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Unsub, yes nature does restore faith in the world, that day was a good day thanks to a feather.


          • Neville

            Beautiful... I have a similar opinion about feathers.. little white ones anyway.....

            • Goldfinch60

              They can mean quite a lot to many people.

            • Christina8

              What an uplifting poem! Thanks for sharing with us..

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Christina, my absolute pleasure.

              • LAWLESS

                Fantastic encouraging poem!

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you for your kind words James.

                • Poetic Dan

                  Beautiful penned of life's little but meaningful events.

                  Thank you for sharing
                  Much peace and respect

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you Dan, those little things can be so meaningful.

                  • ANGELA & BRIAN

                    HI UNCLE ANDY - Thanks for sharing & caring - every thing by Ella is an uplift. We love the mood of the Poem as well. In the sad times in this life - our experience is that God & His Angels always send a little sign (like a Feather) from the Spiritual Dimension to assure You & Your Beloved Joyce that the *Angels are watching over YOU ALL - ALWAYS* - AMEN !

                    Blessings & Peace to YOU & JOYCE
                    Love ANGELA & BRIAN
                    ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก

                    • Goldfinch60

                      As far as I am concerned Ella could sing a telephone directory (do you remember them?) and still sound wonderful.

                    • dusk arising

                      i believe there is a angel or whatever you wish to name it overlooking us all Goldfinch. In my mind i pereceive this as a message/token of reassurance for you from said spirit.

                      It is as if several things you have been led to by tragedy are slotting into place and your faith is being validated and strengthened.

                      Peace of mind.

                      • Goldfinch60

                        I totally agree d a, that peace of mind has taken over my life, I know Joyce is safe and happy, I am returning to my life and My Spirit is always there to reassure me in so many ways.

                      • FredPeyer

                        So beautiful, Orchie! We know the angels are there, but getting a sign once in a while is awesome!

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Please, please do no confuse me with Orchi, I have been trying to get away from him since dinosaurs roamed the earth!
                          Those signs of angels are so meaningful.


                          • FredPeyer

                            So sorry Goldfinch!!!! All I can say is that I AM getting older. It's not an excuse, just a statement.

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