Deciduous
Are you not cold
Tis winter after all
Enquired veronica
The ever greenest shrub
Of the naked and still
Shivering tree
Yes I am very
Very cold indeed
And will be oh’ so much
Re-leaved when
Spring returns and
Smiles down on us
Me too replied the
Naked bush
Deciduous
Yes of course I love you
Both so very much
Sighed Veronica
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Author:
Neville (
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The difference between ever and naked deciduous makes needing that Veronica's warm love so vital methinks.... . I smiled at your word-play with that term - - - "re-leaved" .............intriguing nature- read Nev.
It seems I am so transparent you can see write through me ... bless you and true dear Fay...
Yes - you are and of course I can.................... x Fay
Great write which gave me a smile. Feeling a bit de-leaved myself at the moment.
Thank you Michael.. and I hope you feel better real soon..
Nice word play - good fun read. Root and branch stuff for the fine wordsmith that u are sir!
Bloomin too kind, thats what you are sir... Have a FAB day DA.... N
Wonderful write...enjoyed very much!
thank you Christina..
Brilliant stuff indeed captain!
thank you Dan... much appreciated sir.... Say hi to the family for me.. Neville
Always my friend
My friend poet Neville, I apologize for my ignorance but I did not understand your poem even though I love your words very much. Maybe because I’m not from England? Sending love ❤️
I appreciate your honesty my fine literary friend.... Neville
Clever write Neville, the conversations that go on within forests and woods can be startling.
absolutely .. many thank to you my friend.... N
Nice little write, enjoyed the clever word play
I am delighted.. thanks..
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