I started writing because I'd had enough
All my thoughts were get tangled up
Lost within a vision of my inner world
Mixed-up by the thoughts of yours as well
Then came the relief of saying what I want, any emotion or cry was mine to own
Nothing to fear on how people would respond, I had so much to live for but didn't want to carry on
After reading others souls I felt I was not alone, so many words from others looking to just express their self.
I still have the issue when I can't let go of others feeding their own agenda and goal.
If you have nothing nice to say you should say nothing at all, look at your own baggage and write on your wall.
I don't sing, paint or do performance art but I like to give all, every inch of my heart.
Nothing is overrated and corruption will never end, until we passionately take responsibility of each word we project!
For as easy as it is when a few words can inspire and bring hope, it also only takes a few to make thin or cut that rope.
If you never learned or got shown how to fly, climbing and living on cliffs is all that's in the mind.
All journeys are our own
A path for us to roam
Be mindful as you do
No one is just like you
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I think I didn't lose my point, write and be free don't let others tell you how to be or how to see. Much peace and respect endlessly
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Write on Dan...
....................... Neville
Eye Eye captain
I think you got your message across really well and understood Mr Meistro Poetic Dan...Congratulations on giving life a chance...What a cutie...
Thank you my friend, I'm on a whole new level and if not for you and others in the early days I would not be going full steam ahead!
My appreciation will continue until I take that lady breath, knowing I have back a much as I took. As there ain't no thing as a half way crook!
I can remember when both our paths crossed here on MPS many blue Moons ago and I instantly recognised some similarities between the way we write what poetry we write. Till this day I remain in the same thought progression, we have endured along with our very different lives yet similar ways of writing from the deepest parts of our hearts, minds and souls. I make no gesture upon the fact that we have learned, met and adored others whom we follow and who follow us here on MPS. Many congratulations towards us both. The future has yet to arrive so that's what I'm waiting to see what prevails from it. Good luck, my friend...
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Your life has changed, a life now full of joy, hope, love and a future. Enjoy every moment.
It's cool of everything my friend I'm just trying to focus on the joy!
Always appreciated
None of us know where life will take us. I hope one day, when growing-up is done, and a fullfilled existence surrounds your daughter, she will be able to read the 'selected works of Dan who searched and found'. I think she will be immesely proud and inspired.
I hope so too but if not I'll be happy knowing history did not repeat in my family, I was me of a man than I did see!
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