Assessing the Blues
I see you and
You are not blue
Most definitely not
Mediterranean
Chows tongue
Or Maltese sky blue
I see you
In fact I can see
right through you
I hear you
You don’t sound blue
Most definitely not
True
Berry
Powder
Paint-box
Or duck egg blue
On the contrary
I can see and
I can hear you too
For what it's worth
I would not consider
yourself blue
If I was you
I would consider
myself read
- Author: Neville ( Offline)
- Published: October 1st, 2019 03:42
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 85
- Users favorite of this poem: Fay Slimm.
Comments9
Ha - - a round of applause after reading this poetic play on words my clever friend. If I ever get blue I will read this one again .......... thanking you muchly for my big smile.
Thanks Fay.. I was not sure if this might be as easy to appreciate as I I had hoped.... Best .. N
A newspaper is read and thatch blank and white,,, I am confused are you.
Great inquisitive piece Neville
Thank you kindly Andrew...
Neville,
Words in context...
Nice play on words!
I don’t consider myself blue most of the time...nor red/read all of the time!
I enjoyed reading this play on words!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
thank you Laura and true..
This is a great play on words....a very intelligent read for the first one of the morning...Thanks for that! 🙂
many thank you's my good friend...
Such skill... I look forward to reading your poems each day N. Great play on words.
you are far too kind....
HaHa great play with words and brings a big grin to my face.
Not just a simple play though is it. There's a meaningful "I've got your game weighed up" message loud and clear here telling "you ain't fooling me hun".
Clever and shrewd.
Am so glad you popped in today DA.... cheers mate.. N
Good write N.
thank you O.....
Purples, mauves etc but true blue is the rarest colour in flowers - another rare write N.
Something else I have learnt from you Michael.. and thanks for popping in too sir...
Clever write Neville, there is so much we can do with words.
mighty big thanks sir GF60...
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