Perfect Imperfections

Neville

 

Perfect Imperfections

 

Never mind the epicanthic fold

Nor the simian crease

She really is a picture to behold

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 3rd, 2019 07:25
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Clara

    Truth, I had to Google the terms on the first and second line! So pretty much most of your poem ha! It is stated that the first is considered an abnormality elsewhere around the world... And the second, has negative connotations... And such, the final line... That despite those things and preconceived ideas and beliefs, she is a picture to behold! You see the beauty where others may not... Thats my interpretation anyway haha!

    Oh I had to work for this one. But yes, I like it N...

    And I have just read the title.... Mmmm kinda says it all. Oh well. Isn't this part of the joy of poetry!

    • Neville

      thank you so much my friend.. you certainly seem to have worked hard .. bless ya and truly

    • Fay Slimm.

      Yes the title you give tells how perfect imperfections can enhance the beholder.Each fold and crease has their own beauty to those whose eyes look inside as well as out as your verse implies Nev............. the simian line is said to be the hand's heart and mind line which when joined give close harmony between emotions and mental powers - - such an interesting read with an appealing last line for us to remember when thinking of folds and creases.....

      • Neville

        Hello and thank you dear friend... I do like your take on this little scribble.. many thank you's.... N

      • dusk arising

        Such imperfection as beauty finds lodged into our hearts..... unique beauty knows no better.

        • Neville

          what a lovely thing to say DA...

          Neville

        • Bragee

          beauty itself is in and on everyone,
          its is the eyes doing the looking that decipher the different level of treasures

          • Neville

            tis indeed .. thank you.. Bragee... N

          • Michael Edwards

            More than a little scribble dear friend.

            • Neville

              now you come to mention it..

              thank you Michael... and I do mean thank you...

            • FredPeyer

              Since my wife is Chinese I tend to look at the epicanthic fold as a sign of beauty. You are right, she is a sight to behold, and has been for over 40 years!!!

              • Neville

                You are absolutely correct sir and thank you for dropping in to check on these words of mine.. tis appreciated..

              • Goldfinch60

                Each of us is unique, and are seen to be different to others but beauty is within us so look through the eyes to see that beauty.

                • Neville

                  Thanking you so very much dear friend.... N

                • Poetic Dan

                  Brilliant!

                  • Neville

                    thank you PD...

                  • SerenWise

                    Very sweet

                  • Thoughts In Time

                    In the eye of the beholder ...let it be told🌹

                    • Neville

                      thank you my friend..

                      • Thoughts In Time

                        Pleasure and hello🌹



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