I read a poets art, the inspiration echoed around in my heart. If you wish to get noticed, you need to pull your readers in. Try to make sure my words, keep you attentive and are mostly pleasing.
Now I hope you are fading, all of the other sounds out. Not thinking of the time, or my next rhyme. I'm trying my best, to slow down our minds!
Drawing you in closer, with ever word. Take my hand and leave this earth. Know that in the stars, darkness can do no harm. Your body reads with me, but we are also off, to eternity. no breath is needed, where we want to see.
This spirit can be, any place it wants. Sitting on every shoreline, or any mountain top. Be in the calmness of a breeze, in a valley untouched. Maybe walk through the storms, watching the rawness of natures touch.
Now we guide ourselves, gently back to our vessels, we can take that deep breath in, releasing all that nothingness from within. To remember that grounding, when we take that spirit in, never to leave the lungs again.
I hope your imagination went with me!
You felt all my words, heard that inner harmony!
Did you hear that? (loud fart in your right ear!)
That's life....
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I hope this can measure up to the brilliant peace of writing I read, that inspired me to see if I could pull it off as well. Much peace and respect.
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Life is wonderful and will always remain so within our hearts.
Hahaha, I really hope you intend to swap that last word as I did!
Always appreciated my friend
Well I love that last word - it gave a smile after such an encouraging read.
I glad it read okay and ending was a take of the original art I read!
Always appreciated my friend
Well sometimes we get so carried away we need something to rattle us back to reality(illusion)
Hahaha many inner wind has rattled my cage!
Always appreciated thank you
Pleasure always..then it’s time for Braille and pile we say in South Africa..lol..glasses and pills😜
That' crackingly good and funny Mr Dan..Kepp em coming, my friend...!!!
Right! I laughed so hard when I read one ending in the same manner! He pulled my finger and if I pulled yours let me know if you pass it on! Pmsl... Thanks for that and I hope the humour helps you at the time in your amazing journey, thanks for checking in!
I'll pop around later 😉
yes, please do, it's about time we had a tea in china teapots party..!!!
Good to see you with ya tongue in cheek on MPS m8.
I get te feeling that in this piece you are saying - this is where i'm at, if you're not with me, that's ok... we are all on our own and separate journeys to...... (nirvana perhaps?)
Not according to some my friend but I will now purge my page of what I feel is not. I thought I'd replied to this, always busy trying to live my dream, riding the waves best I can.
Always appreciate your time
Sincerely
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