I feel let down by life
and I ask if it’s worth pursuing,
I continually miss my wife
but at least my aim’s improving.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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My first laugh of the day Michael, thank you.
That kiss that you are aiming at her will soon be there and your love will explode in glory between you both.
It'll be a real smacker - ta Andy.
Doh! heehee. That reminds me to be a snail-saver in damp weather. Well, they can only go half a mile per hour. That much?!
If it comes to the crunch they don't go any further.
Oh - you rascal you - - - this had me in stiches at both the drawing and words.......... I love your wit Michael.
Sometimes I'm too frivolous for my own good. Thanks Fay
Outstandingly you my friend, thanks for the giggle!
My pleasure - cheers Dan.
creative michel,i liked it
I try to aim high...lol
Thanks Ron
well thunk is n the spot
Hello Michael,
A good write!
Life is worth living! Hang on in there!
Keep writing FineB
Thanks FB
Maybe I misunderstood the last line, if not and knowing you meant to be humorous, I know the feeling.
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