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Michael Edwards

 

 

 

 

I feel let down by life

and I ask if it’s worth pursuing,

I continually miss my wife

but at least my aim’s improving.

 

  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 3rd, 2019 02:49
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 22
  • Users favorite of this poem: Poetic Dan
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  • Goldfinch60

    My first laugh of the day Michael, thank you.

    That kiss that you are aiming at her will soon be there and your love will explode in glory between you both.

    • Michael Edwards

      It'll be a real smacker - ta Andy.

    • orchidee

      Doh! heehee. That reminds me to be a snail-saver in damp weather. Well, they can only go half a mile per hour. That much?!

      • Michael Edwards

        If it comes to the crunch they don't go any further.

      • Fay Slimm.

        Oh - you rascal you - - - this had me in stiches at both the drawing and words.......... I love your wit Michael.

        • Michael Edwards

          Sometimes I'm too frivolous for my own good. Thanks Fay

        • Poetic Dan

          Outstandingly you my friend, thanks for the giggle!

        • ron parrish aka wordman

          creative michel,i liked it

        • FineB

          Hello Michael,

          A good write!

          Life is worth living! Hang on in there!

          Keep writing FineB

        • Suresh

          Maybe I misunderstood the last line, if not and knowing you meant to be humorous, I know the feeling.



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