Unmatched.
Shallower sages would never permit streams of
night's glittering stardust to detract them from
edging their message with ego's silk sound.
Meanwhile a poetic dreamer reveals
his penchant for embroidering
that which cannot be sewn,
writes to im-passion
every sunrise,
adds vision
to twilight
Scribes
quill
silence
unmatched
beside verbose
lyrical phrasings,
a dreamy romantic
will drop gilt moondust
around every line enhancing
the ordinary to outshine with art.
Coping with life poets slip outside reality,
spin cotton-wool stories then, mind-flying
between lines steal moments to adorn words
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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Calliope is within you Fay as your (her?) words flow to us all.
Ah - that is such a kind thing to say dear Andy - - my grateful thanks for your dropping by to read Unmatched.
A fine write Fay.
Appreciate your visit and read dear Orchi.
Perfect dear Fay
What a wonderful word to use for my few words on Unmatched - thanking you Michael so much
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening Fay - Just half-watching the ENGLAND vs MONTENEGRO MATCH with BRIAN ! Thnaks for posting an elegant DIABLO-POEM ! Brian & I generally post a mirror Poem to make it symetrical ! You have chosen a much more difficult route (geometrically) by composing a different lower half - AWESOME ! Your POEM mirrors our MANTRA today *POETRY IS ART - MADE WITH WORDS* Your concluding TRIPLET is a challenge to all of US !
Coping with life - Poets sljp outside reality
spin cotton wool stories then - mind-flying
between lines steal moments to adorn words
Blessings & Peae & Joy & Love
Angela & Brian 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
I thought you may like the hourglass form in my few lines on Unmatched - which as you state presents a challenge to all fervent writers. Blessings galore to you both.
"Coping with life poets ship outside reality" to produce works like yours
Many thanks for this generous comment Suresh - - -am delighted you liked the read of Unmatched.
Nowt unclear here dear Fay.. every line thought through precisely
and serving to impress this lover of words and devout disciple of poetry.... N
Ah - - merci monsieur for this kind comment on Unmatched - - so glad you found it clear and impressive............
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