Nearly Won!!

Goldfinch60



He went to New York City

To run the long, long race,

He ran the New York Marathon

At a fast and furious pace.

 

He finished it in glory

With twenty eight thousand behind him,

He was nearly at the front,

As there were only twenty five thousand,

Twenty five thousand for him to run and beat.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 19th, 2019 02:19
  • Comment from author about the poem: A friend of mine went over to New York to watch his son run in the marathon. When he came back I asked him how his son did, very well cam his reply there were 28,000 behind him. But there were also 25,000 in front of him.
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 22
  • Users favorite of this poem: Poetic Dan, Zuzanna Musial
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  • Neville

    cor blimey and now immortalised here.... good on ya both.... I have run two full marathons but never again, I'm sorry to say...

    • Goldfinch60

      Thanks Neville, I have run to the car on occasion.

      • Neville

        snap nowadays....

      • orchidee

        That was good then - only 25,000 in front of him!
        How many were behind us, or in front of us, in 1066?

        • Goldfinch60

          Oh yes, we would have still been running!

          You will never know as you couldn't count above three!

        • Michael Edwards

          Great write accompanied by the sexiest voice to have ever recorded.

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Michael.

            Yes a very sexy voice, I have not heard her for a long time so I looked her up and never realised how many albums she recorded.

            • Michael Edwards

              Some of her recordings still send shivers down my back - I just never tire of listening to her.

            • ANGELA & BRIAN

              GOOD MORNING UNCLE ANDY ~ Brian here off to WORK soon ! Love FLY ME TO THE MOON thnaks for posting ~ cool version ! You & I try to ameliorate our offerings with some decent MUSIC ! Ahhhhh the JOYS & TRIALS of the *Long Distance Runner* I I used to be a MILER (1500 meters) and have done Half-Marthons for Charity ~ much more gruelling than it looks ! Thanks for the ODE ! When running or smimming competitively my MANTRA always was *Forgetting those that are BEHIND ~ I press on to beat those that are in FRONT !*

              Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOUR LOVELY JOYCE
              Love BRIACN & ANGELA ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Brian, I had never heard her sing this song as I always associate it with Frank Sinatra.

                I never could run but I could walk well and have walked in charity walks in the past, a long time past.

                On one ten mile 'walk' I was told by the organisers that I was the first to finish who had walked it, the few in front of me had run some of the way.

              • orchidee

                We've nearly won with 1,000 poems milestone - 3 days to go for both of us!

              • kevin browne

                Gosh, that left me of of breath. Nice one and well done...

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you Kevin, just go and rest now to get your breath back.

                • Suresh

                  Thnx for a light one, reminds me of the one I did in college, at Hemel Hempstead in sixties

                  • Goldfinch60

                    My pleasure Suresh.

                  • Zuzanna Musial

                    Dear Goldfinch60 - this is a very unique poem, it is a thought provoking. It seems like many would run the marathon to be in a first place.But this sounds like he was the winner...Great reading...Thank you...Zuzanna



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