Michael Edwards

COUPLETS (4)

 

 

 

Practice, practice, practice profusely:

a single fart doesn’t make a jacuzzi.

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  • Goldfinch60

    Thank you Michael, my first smile of the day.

    I see you have been dragging things across your canvas again - there is a lot in that to pull me in, very good.

    • Michael Edwards

      Yes - not one of my best but done at a quick demo I gave under rather difficult conditions.

    • orchidee

      Swoon! I was expecting the line - a single swallow does not make a Summer, when I read 'a single....'
      Miss Berles wants to know how many bubbles in the jacuzzi are from the mechanism, and how many are from.......?!lol.

    • FineB

      Hello Michael,

      A wonderful write and I applaud you for your lovely Couplets quartet and brilliant artwork.

      Practice does indeed make perfect and strategic planning in one's life overall which perhaps I have not done enough of!

      Keep writing FineB

    • ANGELA & BRIAN

      Thanks NOTRE ONCLE Michael ~ you have the knack to make good poetry look EASY. Love your SCRABSRACT ~ It reminded us of the INSIDE of the ENIGMA Machine !

      Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
      Love ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

      • Michael Edwards

        Gee thanks - it's just a matterv of getting the metre right

      • SabreLi

        That certainly packed a punch! XD



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