Treasured.
I remember that day,
a grainy twilight draining sky's colour,
strange iridescent skin
on the water and wind lifting my hair.
I remember the burst
of birds into flight from silhouette trees,
limestone luminescence
and the damp of rocks cooling my feet.
Such peace I remember
as I waited for you and our rendezvous,
nervous, yet love grew
memories never so treasured as then.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: December 2nd, 2019 05:55
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Comments5
A fine write Fay.
Warm thanks for your visit and comment dear Orchi.
Such a thought provoking write, how simple, yet complicated as we know humans can be. Beauty in every thought if one stops and feels the words.... splendid work
What a deilghtful comment dear sara - - thank you so much for your visit and review of of the poem Treasured.
Another wonderful voicing Fay, thank you.
Ex animo, Alan
Your dropping by to have a read of my few words is always welcomed - thanks a load Alan for your support of my "voicing'' - love that word.
A perfect write Fay - can't say more.
This says enough and delights me to know you enjoyed the read dear Michael. Thank you loads.
Wonderful write Fay, those days are always so very special.
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