I TOOK HER OUT

Michael Edwards

 

 

She had a seductive pout

Which excited me - I admit it

I thought I might take her out

And just one bullet did it.

  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 11th, 2019 01:42
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  • Goldfinch60

    Was she standing at the window in your painting?

    • Michael Edwards

      She was hiding behind the Butter Cross.

    • orchidee

      A fine write and pic M. Was she any relation to the Berles?

    • dusk arising

      A silver bullet saved your life for behind that pout was a set of vampyre teeth..... what about taking her out for a steak/stake instead?

      • Michael Edwards

        Oh that's sharp - tafull muchloads da.

      • ron parrish aka wordman

        that`s all it takes,,one bullet

      • myself and me

        It is so nice to see the bright painting in this gloomy winter day. I am not sure about her though. As always, nice poem with humor.

      • ANGELA & BRIAN

        Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ Very DROLL ~ There are 50 ways to *Take out a Girl* the one you chose is the one most Sure & Simple ! Love the painting ~ we are House Hunting and our Heart wants us to live in an ESSEX VILLAGE ~ BUT our HEAD wants us to live near the STATION - The College & The Hospital - Its always a mistake to VOTE GREEN and sell ones CARS ! We havent yet but Friday will be too late !

        Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
        Love BRIAN & ANGELA ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’š

      • Andrew Charles Forrest

        Sooooo romantic Michael I hope at least it was a silver one? You know what they say about those toothy pouts...

      • Suresh

        and Scottland Yard ruled ....
        "It was a matter of self defense".

        ... your defense that her pout would have sucked the life out of you, left you with no alternative... seemed convincing.....ohhhh!!! but what a way to go!!!

        Light and charming post indeed



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