She had a seductive pout
Which excited me - I admit it
I thought I might take her out
And just one bullet did it.
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Michael Edwards (
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Was she standing at the window in your painting?
She was hiding behind the Butter Cross.
A fine write and pic M. Was she any relation to the Berles?
She was Deducta.
A silver bullet saved your life for behind that pout was a set of vampyre teeth..... what about taking her out for a steak/stake instead?
Oh that's sharp - tafull muchloads da.
that`s all it takes,,one bullet
Just one - cheers Ron.
It is so nice to see the bright painting in this gloomy winter day. I am not sure about her though. As always, nice poem with humor.
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ Very DROLL ~ There are 50 ways to *Take out a Girl* the one you chose is the one most Sure & Simple ! Love the painting ~ we are House Hunting and our Heart wants us to live in an ESSEX VILLAGE ~ BUT our HEAD wants us to live near the STATION - The College & The Hospital - Its always a mistake to VOTE GREEN and sell ones CARS ! We havent yet but Friday will be too late !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💚🧡💚🧡💚
Sooooo romantic Michael I hope at least it was a silver one? You know what they say about those toothy pouts...
and Scottland Yard ruled ....
"It was a matter of self defense".
... your defense that her pout would have sucked the life out of you, left you with no alternative... seemed convincing.....ohhhh!!! but what a way to go!!!
Light and charming post indeed
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