Shore-Song.
Ground shakes
as massive breakers force reverberation.
Blast booms,
rock face crash-cracks, creating spume.
Waves break
over fall's gradation as race accelerates.
Wind sound
grinds into groundswell as din re-bounds.
Sea weight
trapping soaked air hangs in anticipation.
Foam flung
as tide turns face for yet more shore-song.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: December 19th, 2019 05:56
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Comments5
Hello Fay,
An atmospheric and evocative poem.
Waves are a force in themselves.
Keep writing FineB
Beautiful Fay - a fine write.
A lovely write Fay.
Can hear the music Fay. The timpani highlights the crashing waves.
Ex animo, Alan
Another wonderful sea poem Fay, thank you.
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