POETRY
A thought that transports the mind,
captured before it’s forgotten.
That for me is poetry
in language sublimely defined.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A shorty first published as a contribution to a fusion poem.
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I sublimely define this as a good write and pic M. You seen any Berles lately?!
No only Inviza Berles
I remember this from the fusion. Glad to see it given more justice.
Thanks Nicholas
Ah - spot on Michael. A superb definition of how to write poetry in these four lines.
Thank you Fay - it's the ones that come to mind and are forgotten before I can get to pen and paper - and then spend hours to try recalling them - that are so frustrating.
Hello Michael,
A wonderful write and you have captured the essence of poetry with a beautiful sunset in the background.
Keep writing FineB
Aw thanks FineB - much appreciated.
"A thought that transports the mind,
captured before it’s forgotten."
You captured my mind, I shall tell you before I forget. Simply love the color of the paint.
Lovely comment - so much appreciated - thanks muchly m&m
ANGELA HERE - GOOD EVENING MON ONCLE MICHAEL *Now the day is Over* is an apt title for your abstract Sunset ! We love the POEM ! Poetry is very elusive to define but Yours ........
A thought that transports the mind
Captured before its forgotten
....... Is very apt ! Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace to You and Yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡
So very true Michael.
Great artwork.
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