Shining on My Life. Senryu

Goldfinch60



The Full Moon looks down,

Spreading its glory all round,

Shining on My Life.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 11th, 2020 02:19
  • Comment from author about the poem: I was looking at the Full Moon last night and these words came to me.
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • orchidee

    A fine write Gold. And not even my singing to dull the shining! lol.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thanks Orchi and very true.

    • dusk arising

      Long may you feel the glow Goldfinch.

      • Goldfinch60

        I am sure that I will d a.

      • Nemo

        May it always shine on you 🌹♥️

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Nemo, most kind.

        • ron parrish aka wordman

          and may it shine bright

        • Michael Edwards

          Shine on - great senryu

          • Goldfinch60

            Most kind Michael.

          • Jon Nakapalau

            Well done!

          • ANGELA & BRIAN

            Thanks UNCLE ANDY - Love this version of BLACKBIRD - very PROGRESSIVE ! Loved the MOON last night we had a great display in ESSEX and every mood & colour ! Full - Bright - Partial Eclipse & Reddish and not a cloud in the SKY ! Love your ODE to Sister Moon !

            You will apreciate a CHEMICAL C W PUZZLE CLUE
            4. DOWN - Pyolusitic Orb (4 letters)
            MnO2 = MNOO Anagram of MOON !

            Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
            Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💜🧡

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you A and B.



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