across the stars

dusk arising

 

as shadow falls
across the stars
i beheld
reflected
upon deep
china blue eyes
of longing
and devotion
so evening
descends
into sombre
melancholy
reminiscence

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 11th, 2020 07:47
  • Comment from author about the poem: im pleased to say that this was written to create a mood rather than any mood that i have experienced lately
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments4

  • orchidee

    A fine write DA. Did ya see me? I'm a blue-eyed-boy, ya know - as they say!

    • dusk arising

      I heard u only had one eye after that arrow incident on the beach.

    • ron parrish aka wordman

      sounds like a sweet place to be

    • Michael Edwards

      Must get me a visa - oh those eyes.

      • dusk arising

        You can get them at the leaning tower of.....

      • Goldfinch60

        Beautiful words d a.

        • dusk arising

          It's all about memories.



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