FIVE SENSES ~ 4 SENRYU & A TANKA !

ANGELA & BRIAN



VISION

There is a thrill ~ the

first time you see something ~ A

Sunrise ~ Future Wife !

 

HEARING

We live in a World 

of sound *The Sound of Music* 

and Your Lovers Voice !

 

SMELL

Smell makes Food taste good

Scent of Your Lovers ~ Hot-Pot

IRRESISTIBLE ! 

 

TASTE

A Bacon Butty

tastes good ! But not as good as 

Your Lovers sweet LIPS !

 

TOUCH (Tanka 5 7 5 7 7)

You touch my Finger

Tips ~ My Heart is aglow ! Im

Going overboard 

with a CAPITAL *O* ~ Ohhhhh

You have raised my LIBID-O !

 

Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love Angela & Brian 🧡💙🧡      

  • Author: ANGELA & BRIAN (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 29th, 2020 03:03
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 16
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  • orchidee

    Have to swoon at this, as the poem goes on! heehee. Aww, Fido only allows me to read up to 'bacon butty'. He says - have one, and never mind that 'exciting' or 'amorous' stuff. He's an old wet blanket! lol.

    • ANGELA & BRIAN

      Good Night UNCLE STEVE ~ Thanks for Your Comments ~ We didnt think it merited an 18 ! Human beings are very sensual and we should treat each sense as precious & equal !

      Blessings to You & Your Wet Blanket Beagle !
      Love in the Spirit Angela & Brian 💛💛💛

    • FineB

      Hello Angela and Brian.

      A superb write and enchanting perspective on love!

      Keep writing FineB

      • ANGELA & BRIAN

        Thanks FB ~ Pleased you enjoyed it !

        Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛

      • Michael Edwards

        Fine write A&B

        • ANGELA & BRIAN

          Thanks Uncle Mike ~ Please check comments there are noe EIGHT ! The additional THREE are a Little Gift from Little Gift ! Being a PHYSIO I concentrated on the tactile ones rather than the cerebral ones ~ OK !

          Blessings & Peace & Joy
          Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛

        • Fay Slimm.

          Now who among your daily readers could ever resist how your relate to the wonderful senses and I chuckled at that final couplet on Touch........ roll on next April then eh dear duo ?

          • ANGELA & BRIAN

            Thanks Fay it is worth the effort to post an Ode when one gets 12 views and 5 intersting comments ! Thanks for yours much appreciated. Yes indeed ~ I will be a much wiser Man by MAY and MAYBE even a Daddy by MAY 2021 or 2022 ? The good ship MPS seems to be sailing smoothly of late ?

            Blessings & Peace & Joy
            Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛

          • Goldfinch60

            Very good write but in the senses there may be another which we see every day - love.

            Andy



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