VISION
There is a thrill ~ the
first time you see something ~ A
Sunrise ~ Future Wife !
HEARING
We live in a World
of sound *The Sound of Music*
and Your Lovers Voice !
SMELL
Smell makes Food taste good
Scent of Your Lovers ~ Hot-Pot
IRRESISTIBLE !
TASTE
A Bacon Butty
tastes good ! But not as good as
Your Lovers sweet LIPS !
TOUCH (Tanka 5 7 5 7 7)
You touch my Finger
Tips ~ My Heart is aglow ! Im
Going overboard
with a CAPITAL *O* ~ Ohhhhh
You have raised my LIBID-O !
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love Angela & Brian 🧡💙🧡
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Author:
ANGELA & BRIAN (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 29th, 2020 03:03
- Category: Love
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Comments5
Have to swoon at this, as the poem goes on! heehee. Aww, Fido only allows me to read up to 'bacon butty'. He says - have one, and never mind that 'exciting' or 'amorous' stuff. He's an old wet blanket! lol.
Good Night UNCLE STEVE ~ Thanks for Your Comments ~ We didnt think it merited an 18 ! Human beings are very sensual and we should treat each sense as precious & equal !
Blessings to You & Your Wet Blanket Beagle !
Love in the Spirit Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
Hello Angela and Brian.
A superb write and enchanting perspective on love!
Keep writing FineB
Thanks FB ~ Pleased you enjoyed it !
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛
Fine write A&B
Thanks Uncle Mike ~ Please check comments there are noe EIGHT ! The additional THREE are a Little Gift from Little Gift ! Being a PHYSIO I concentrated on the tactile ones rather than the cerebral ones ~ OK !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
Now who among your daily readers could ever resist how your relate to the wonderful senses and I chuckled at that final couplet on Touch........ roll on next April then eh dear duo ?
Thanks Fay it is worth the effort to post an Ode when one gets 12 views and 5 intersting comments ! Thanks for yours much appreciated. Yes indeed ~ I will be a much wiser Man by MAY and MAYBE even a Daddy by MAY 2021 or 2022 ? The good ship MPS seems to be sailing smoothly of late ?
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
Very good write but in the senses there may be another which we see every day - love.
Andy
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