She Rises.
Dawn and night-clouds part the horizon,
Dark muddy blues turn suddenly light
Spilling change on her hues as she rises,
And oh that fullness of sight.
Glow of greeting bequests later heat-time,
Brazen sun brooks no trace of the night.
She aims to captivate dark guilelessly
With oh such flourish of style.
Her blush in pale sky flashes a brightness
Over first tremble of her prelude to fire.
She welcomes day by blazing sublimely
In oh what a show of surprise
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Fay Slimm. (
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I wrote these few lines after sight of a sun-rise last summer - - - hope it helps to illuminate the waiting until summer arrives in the U.K. again.
There's sunshine on the horizon - super write Fay.
Good write Fay.
Lovely poem Fay 🙂
A warming write for today Fay, well done
'The blush of dawn may yet restore
Our light and joy and hope once more.
Sad soul, take comfort, nor forget
That sunrise never failed us yet'.
~ Celia Thaxter.
Ex animo, Alan
ANGELA HERE - Good evening Fay ! Thanks for a great tribute to Brother Sun the sustainer of all life on Earth through Photosynthesis and maintainng the ambient Temperature - currently at 16C (= 61F).
V 1. Let there be light
V 2. Let the sunlight define the DAY
V 3. Yes indeed each New Day is a Surprise but it is also
a Provision. One of our Creators sublime Gifts to Mankind.
It behoves us not to agravate the SUN into Global Warming !
The SUN is mechanistic and responds to Our Excesses !
Blessings & Peace & Joy to You
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
Overpowered by majestic sun
darkness hides in shadows
until, reaching it's zenith
darkness recedes beneath
where rat and damp foulness
give solace
Fay sometimes you create a vision in my mind ,with your writing, that has to 'out'. Such was today.
'Over first tremble of her prelude to fire' what an amazing line of poetry.
The sun in our lives is there every morning and always will be, great write Fay.
Andy
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